While it makes me sick that this is how Jacob became...I can only blame SM for making Jacob Black an inconsistent second male lead. Like he was everything you expected of a best friend and potential, eventual love—and then she turned him into an unbearable monster. I like your story and I will continue reading it

Eww wtf! Why the hell did you pair Charlie with Angela?! That’s just wrong!

"Stay with me" "always" is a hunger games thing. Get your vampire werewolf buttfuckery away from my everlark google searches byoch

Wow romanticising rape! How much more disturbing can you get? You need to see a professional sweetie, your mind is one sick place.

This was a great story I enjoyed reading it very much...Even with Bella going through so very much, it touched my heart...thanks for sharing it with us...I loved it...thanks, huggs. Peggy

I reeeally tried to give this a chance, but it's not happening. There really is no plot, no character depth or development. In fact no personalities. Everyone is nice to Bella and than a switch flips and they want to rape her because they think that's what is going to make her understand she is in love with them. Even if it is all Victoria, it's really not successfully written. I don't mind rape in stories, because unfortunately it happens in real life like any other crime. But it's only acceptable if it contributes to the plot. Having her (almost) raped by three people she cares about in what feels like a week, is just inconsiderate for victims out there. It is like you are using rape to create drama because you don't really know what to write about. Also how she and everyone around her react is just not realistic and even more inconsiderate to victims out there.

(wrinkled face with pleasure)

I really liked it.

I have the feeling Charley heard her yell Sam's name.

it's really pretty.

What the fuck is wrong with you? Do you get off on this? Just pick a focal character and torture the fuck out of them for creative bravo and ratings? Sick. I don't fucking care if you find a way to fix this shit hole plotline. I don't care about fictional bullshit. I care that there are twisted fucks who will use rape as a tool for reviews.

Enjoyed this story.

Okay I'm sorry, I tried. I got about 6 chapters in...I can't do it. There's no depth, no background to any surroundings, I never know where anyone is physically...No background thoughts from anyone...Sorry.

Awesome story

This Story has turned into my all thine favorite story I was always looking for a great story and I was attached to this one in the first chapter I read this in one sitting I was so attached it was amazing.