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Hunter-hero-girl chapter 6 . 7/16 Puppy's! :D Gotta love 'em! Alien or from Earth |
Red-Hag chapter 2 . 5/12 If the mate i loved pulled another male like this in my sanctuary, without my consent... I would feel betrayed. If my mate would leave unsatisfied to force to mate another, i would feel betrayed and furious. I would leave this one with more regard for him. Is Amelia so cocj whipped that she has lost all self respect ? Oh well, a human without a back bone among yautjas is a plaything, a high maintenance toy for eccentric male. Pity. |
Guest chapter 26 . 1/18 This is one of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read so thank you very much. I hope you continue writing. |
Archive of Warriors chapter 1 . 1/2 I hope you continue this story, I was hooked on it for weeks and now I'm coming back to it. I love this story so much! I hope you continue it, and I hope you write more stories! |
peinisimo chapter 26 . 9/27/2019 Is this discontinued? |
Little Tusk chapter 1 . 9/4/2019 THIS STORY IS FRIKKIN’ FANTASTIC! It has everything! YautjaXHumanXYautja relationship; Political intrigue; Clan strife; Very believable characters; Puppies; Good Yautja; Evil yautja; Scheming Elders ; A mysterious father and sooooooo much more! This is definitely one of my top five favorite stories! I would love to see it continued! ( But if you aren’t going to continue it, could you please please please let me know if it is okay with you if I write an continuation? I would totally give you credit! I’m not someone who would steal your stories!:):):) If you got writers block, I totally understand! That happens to me too! ). I hope you’re doing well! I’ll ask Paya to watch over you! Whenever I see that someone hasn’t posted for a long time, I always wonder what happened to them , and hope it wasn’t something negative! I have read some reviews where the reviewer has said really mean things and I don’t think that is appropriate. Would they like it if they couldn’t update because they got sick, injured, ect and others posted mean reviews? No they would NOT ! Why do people think it’s okay to be mean? Anyway, sending happiness and kind thoughts! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2019 omg please update awesome story! |
BlackDragonTalon chapter 26 . 8/9/2019 Please update soon! This is amazing! |
ToxicJekyl chapter 26 . 8/2/2019 Hm... just realized you haven't updated in over 3 years XD I am just taking a wild guess here and say you wont finish this story""" but yeah okey thanks for all the work you put in so far and I wish you all the best ( if you even ever read this ) |
ToxicJekyl chapter 25 . 8/2/2019 Why do I get the feeling that Raz'has Instructor was the very same one who led the previous revolution attempt? xD seems legit... |
ToxicJekyl chapter 24 . 8/2/2019 All I got to say is... NOT THE PUPPIES! |
ToxicJekyl chapter 23 . 8/2/2019 Hm... what to say what to say I am kinda stuck in a circle thinking just how messed up all of this really is... and just why it seems the only one willing and able to do something is a human who by most is considered nothing but a pet. If this continues she truly will start a revolution and be the next freaking high priestess or something like that lol On another note I love her interactions with Yeyinde they seem to wipe of each other or at least he properly gets a kick out of her and more so getting a rise out of Raz'ha :D |
ToxicJekyl chapter 22 . 8/2/2019 Mahhhh if I was in Amelia's shoe's I would have made it clear that hunting Bad Blood humans would be much more challenging than hunting non Bad Bloods and that in doing so they would prove themselves much more capable than otherwise. Also their trophies would be much more impressive! Vive la révolution! Seems to be the ongoing topic in the last view chapters :P And honestly I would cheer my ass off if you would decide to have that happen and couldn't wait for those disgusting, greedy, selfish females to get what they deserve! |
ToxicJekyl chapter 21 . 8/2/2019 Finally she is beginning to use that brain of her's god obviously gave her XD can't wait to see what will happen next! |
ToxicJekyl chapter 20 . 8/2/2019 I still don't get how the breeding between them would work and why would it only produce human babies? I mean no matter which way you look at it in the end both their DNA would mix... so ehhhXD The only way for their not be any mixing of DNA would be to what take sperm from a human? But that is not what was implied so yeah I am confused... Human trinket my ass... just saved yours right :P Bet that will make a really great story :) At least I hope it will make one WHEN they return because really you wouldn't be so cruel and have them die right? |