Now we're moving into the more steamy territory and I'm liking it, poor Kan-chan but this needed to happen to push these two idiots together!

This chapter was delightfully creepy and I love what I'm reading so far, can't wait to read the rest now!

wonderful!~~~~

I recently heard about this anime. I'm glad I got to read this!

you know what? I've read this a few times before,and I still ocassionally read it when im in the mood for feels. this was an amazing composition. I have actually managed to convince myself that it actually happened in the future.

thank you so much
I dont think Ive ever written anything in the more than 5 times reading and rereading this piece so.
now I just wanted to thank you

*tears up in overwhelming happiness*
Me: I can't leave this storyyy!Why don't it happennnn?
Me 2:*sight* let it go, myself, let it go

Loved it!

That was cute!

I liked. Although I feel that I miss you a little about the critical point in the disease actually really liked the ending.

Well thought out, wonderfully characterised and beautifully written! You managed to capture the feel of the manga/anime exceptionally well, from the way the characters acted with each other to the darker, more poignant scenes. I think that delirious Kantarou was done especially well and I can picture him making every single one of those ridiculous requests of Haruka and I can also picture Haruka's desire to want to comply but also his struggle with himself because he doesn't want to hurt his master. In my opinion, kantarou has always been a complex character. Mostly he is coy and fun with a heart of gold, but there are times I see him as almost sadistic and cruel in a way. You managed to convey that so well.
Oh god I'm babbling. Overall I really loved this fic! It was heart warming and wrenching all at once. Good job!

AWE! SO CUTE! LOVE THE STORY!

Loved the chapter X3 is it just me or is kantarou a "little" suicidal. Lol either way I love it so keep it up XD luvs ya! ;D

Okay, okay, sooo...like...my curiosity is excited once again, if anyone knows what that means. If not, I'll explain it a little bit. I'm one of those who gets all excited over psychologically and technology involved things. Is this a phsychologically involved? I had Psychology I and II in high school. Ummm...Wait. Can you actually get a fever that high and still survive? I mean, I thought...200 degrees Farienheight, due excuse my spelling. Hmmm...unless, most of the cells within the body die...doesn't the person sustain some damage to the body (i.e. blind, deaf, etc.)? I'm confused here. Excuse my silly ramble. That's just me being curious and trying to make sense of things.

Urgh...and my poor neck is cramped! When I move it one way, I actually feel and hear it do this weird thing. It rolls and snap, crackle, pops. I think I may have bad posture.

Ahem! Anyway, this story seems like it can actually happen to a person. I mean the extremely high temperature part. Also, the flirty parts.

I like romance fanfiction, especially if they are Tactics or Natsume's Book of Friends.

I tried to create a Tactics fanfiction that's romance and supernatural based. I fear I may have wandered off topic several times. I fear I may have gone all over the place. The same thing for my Natsume's Book of Friends fanfiction that's supposed to be a romance and it's supposed to have action in it and maybe some suspense. I purposely left off where the young woman dives in front of Tanuma as soon as she sees silver glint out from the corners of her eyes. I don't know if this was the best thing to do, but...I didn't know where to go from there.

I HAD TO READ IT ALL. This is the first truly, dramatically emotion-packed fic I've read in this fandom. You miss, have done a marvelous job on this. At times creepy, borderline nauseating but all the same, it is sweet and heart-wrenching. Now I could die happily if I could find an M rated scene this beautiful with them. (I'm exaggerating a little but I'm sure you get what I'm trying to say. :D)

In this chapter, you captured Kantarou's obsession with Haruka so well. In a sense it's as morbid as Haruka thinking about ripping his eyes out of their sockets. *shivers* Good job.