Interesting...

Nice. One of the things I liked the most was that there really wasn’t any bashing of characters. I would love to see either outtakes or fics of the what-ifs with: Alice and Charlie; Jane and Edward; the mind-meld; and everything else.

Great read. Thanks for sharing.

I LOVVVVE IT

Thanks for sharing your story. It's been fun reading through the whole thing again to see how it's evolved. I understand the pride in a finished piece, even if it's nothing special to others. Congrats on completing this one and even if you never post them publicly, know that I will always happily read any story (finished or not) you need an opinion on or just want to share. 8-)

Such a sweet ending. I really enjoyed this.

I like that you gave a hope of a not unhappy ending for Charlie.

Wow. I wouldn't have been able to stop reading for a bit if I'd made it through this chapter.

Got to love siblings that support each other. 8-)

Things sure do get complicated fast with this bunch. It will be interesting to see what happens back in WA and see if Izzy decides she needs to go back to protect Charlie.

This is so sweet. I like the idea of Izzy getting to stay friends with at least some of her Cullen family members.

The plot thickens. V back to take them out as revenge maybe?

That certainly would be confusing for Izzy. She has a very skewed perspective on pretty much everything comparatively speaking.

Ooh, mysterious. Tricksy of you not to tell us a lot of detail or show us what Aro and no Izzy know right away.

I love that they think of Charlie. Someone needs to.