Submitted as an alternate sound track to chapter 4: Bright Eyes - You Will. You? Will. You? Will. You? Will.

Loving this story beyond words to express.

I love this story.

I love this story. It needs some editing, like when in chapter 22, I remember the words "as wonderful and cozy denial easy" and "run the twice", but the tone of this story, the language, the insights Lorelai gives Rory on the books she keeps receiving, the fact that Jess chose that route for communication - I love it all.

Beautiful in content and in writing style. Great job! I love nearly everything about this fic (the part my heart can live without is the distance between these two, whether they're together literally or not for the most part of the fic- I can really feel their heartaches that it hurts me a lot, which makes you a really good writer ...lol...to get me to feel that way...lol...you have also gave me great happiness with the resolution to the Lterati drama and angst near the end.. .lol...so thank you for that!). Thank you so much for writing & sharing!

Gah, that broke my heart and made me tear. Good job! Lol

Oh man, they're just gonna kill me with all this UST! Lol!

Oh ok, not JavaJunkie but Fate that brought them together. That's even better! Lol! I'm glad they can feel comfortable towards each other again. Looking forward to "the talk" (finally! Lol!) Thank you!

Rory getting away from it all literally to just think and reflect about her and Jess' relationship makes sense to me. There's nothing there to distract her but her thoughts & feelings.

JavaJunkie set them up, huh? At the end there. Lol! I love it! Thank you!

Thank goodness Jess was there in that bus! Again, I looooove your Jess, how gentlemanly and respectful he is now to Rory and Lorelai respectively.

Literati staring at each other, that longing in their gazes, and the small steps they take toward each other is so wonderful to watch / read / imagine. Thank you!

Love your Lorelai, defending Jess the way she did. Rory's fear of getting hurt by him again is probably the main reason that she doesn't return to him in canon especially when he asked her to run away with him.

This breaks my heart for Literati

Awww, I love your Lorelai...so understanding of Literati ...and she saved Rory's Jess' box from being completely gone

Lol at Rory rendering Jess speechless ...love their openness & honesty about intimacy for them

I looooooove your writing! It has so much depth that I don't know where to begin. Thank you!