Can you continue the story please what happened next is damara would help save her father

well,it is good that you have sent cute little Damy into the send me the name of next chapter.I love to read themthey are always great.

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won't you continue the story? I really want to see what happened.

I just started reading the story, right after Surprize! and I'm still crying. I was just thinking that Avril Lavigne's song My happy ending suits perfectly on Damara.

Hi! I am loving your story so far... I really want to Damy and Brandon together, it would be so cute! Please write again soon because its killing me to be left at such a cliffhanger! You are awesome :)

Can you do more chapters please.

This is getting good.

ya i don't get this story at all

WRITE WRITE WRITE!

WTF IS GOING ON?

Hey WinXlight, your story is really interesting, please keeping writting! I'm a wee bit confused on what's going on exactly, how did the original Brandon and Sky die? If I were to guess that after she'd been with Brandon Jr. she got sucked into a time vortex or something would I be right? And lastly a little bit of constructive criticism for you, work on your spelling and grammar mistakes. They aren't bad ones but they do confuse readers when you have wrote death instead of dead ( Ch.5 Stella's POV). I hope to see some new stuff frm you soon I really likeyour story!

Sunshine & Smiles,

CharlotteAnnRae:)

its good you should write some more

Wow its great! Please go on!

Please update soon!

Awesome I loved this chapter especially stella's dream please continue soon!

Awesome I cant wait for the next chapter!