| Reviews for Animagus |
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NaginiFay chapter 5 . 9/10/2013 So an AU of your AU. It was pretty good, but the whole time I was wondering why Mai and Marsha weren't freaking out that Naru and Gene were missing. |
weezerz2490 chapter 5 . 7/15/2010 please write a sequel to this one! *sad puppy eyes* |
BloodyXan-Xan chapter 5 . 6/17/2010 Avery cute and funny story indeed |
Fairyfae chapter 5 . 6/12/2010 The stories premise was okay but it was really focused on the new character too much for it to be really good fan fiction. You developed a super powerful, practical, beautiful Mary Sue...one of the most annoying types. |
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 5 . 5/31/2010 i am glad that they returned the twins to their original forms but...are they gonna meet again? Mai really loves Naru and they just, left. i really hope they meet. are you going to make another continue sequel story that they'll meet again? i really would like MAIxNARU. they are so kawaii. please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
missyangel87 chapter 5 . 5/31/2010 Thanx for finishing it up but i was a little bit disappointed that it concluded too fast,you know in one chapter.I hope that maybe you will write some luck with your new story!bye ) |
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 4 . 5/22/2010 Marsha took it well that her cat is human, what about Mai? she is having a beautiful guy living with her these days, even in a cat form. i hope he'll be nice to her or else Naru really is the greatest gerk ever! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
missyangel87 chapter 4 . 5/22/2010 Ha ha ha *TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH?* ) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
thearistocrat chapter 3 . 5/15/2010 Cute end to the chapter. ] Very nice work. |
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 3 . 5/15/2010 kawaii! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
missyangel87 chapter 3 . 5/14/2010 Ha ha ha they are really cute! |
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 2 . 5/9/2010 interesting! so Naru and Gene are cats and with Mai and her friend. this is going to be really awesome and i really want to read the resft of the story really soon! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
lil whit chapter 2 . 4/24/2010 Interesting storyline... But the format needs to change. Start a new paragraph each time a new person speaks... It took me a bit to figure out who was talking. Also, don't just fill up the story with dialogue. Too much or too little can kill a story. Anyway, I look forward to see what comes of this. n.n |
Liris chapter 2 . 4/24/2010 Ok, I like this idea, but you seriously have to sort out your formatting. Who was saying what? Start a new paragraph each time a new person speaks. I assume the bold was Gene and the *speech* was Naru? I like this, a lot, but you need to change the format. It's confusing as hell |
missyangel87 chapter 2 . 4/24/2010 LIKE IT!Please update it as soon as possible! )lol they are so cute! |