I love your stories so much that I'm already back for a second read... You did such a beautiful job with book 1! I know a lot of us are still hoping you'll come back to finish the series someday, but even if you don't, we love everything you did get through!

Thanks so much for writing this excellent view of Stephenie Meyer's Twilight from Jasper's point of view. I have always enjoyed reading the Twilight tales from Jazz's perspective, and this particular one, is a masterpiece! Well done!

I loved your look at these events from Jasper's POV. He is such a deep person, and you let him finally have a voice. I love your writing. I will certainly look to see what else you have written.

Still the best on this platform.

I can see it's been 6 years since you wrote this, but I just stumbled upon your story, devoured it in 2 days and had to review! It's wholly amazing! You made Jasper and Alice and everyone feel so real! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and I will check out your other stories too!

Love it.

Aww!

Beautiful! Such a tender, emotional and heart-wrenching chapter. I live this story! Finally, a new perspective of Twilight.

mmm this was nice..i've always liked jasper,& it was certainly interesting to see twilight from his perspective as well as parts of his history :)

WOW! I hate to admit I spent my whole day off reading this, but it was so worth it! I love Jasper. Has and will always be my favorite character, and to read Twilight from his view was awesome! Now...off to the sequel!

This was fabulous. you really captured Alice and jasper's essences. I loved having the flashbacks of Jasper's past, while i;m not sure how ell they fit in with twilight, I loved reading about them. You did a fantastic job on this!

Wow! Even though I know how this ends, I'm still breathless... waiting for more. Great job!

Poor Alice! Poor Jasper! You're right, I don't know who to feel more sorry for. I didn't think I'd ever see Alice angry like that, especially not towards him, though I know she's not angry AT him, she's just directing it at him for the moment. But I'm taking small comfort in that she's *trying* not to lash out at him. I can only imagine how much it hurts him to have her shut him out and to not feel what she's feeling. Just another couple chapters and then I can start on Trial by Fire! Whee!

I've already been enjoying this story quite a bit! I love your portrayal of Jasper and the relationship between him and Alice is sooo beautiful! I loved the coincidence that they met on April 3, which happens to be my birthday, and since they are my favorite characters in the series, it is quite fitting! :D I cried when Edward turned on Jasper. Poor guy never gets a break from anyone! He already beats himself up enough and then Edward has to flip out on him. At least he apologized though and at least Alice was there to soothe him. Can't wait to keep reading!