| Reviews for Saccharine |
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HybridDragoness chapter 1 . 9/29/2010 I wanted to write a oneshot similar to this. Never has enough depth when I think of it... Anyway, gorgeous writing; short and sweet too! KHue~ |
Peachy Momo Chan chapter 1 . 7/19/2010 I liked this story a lot! And what made it a hole lot better is that I was listening 2 Samson by Regina Spektor Her song starts off on how you ended your story! |
epicBANG chapter 1 . 4/28/2010 How sweet! To describe his feelings spot on in such a length was great! (: (Not that it's a bad thing it's short!) I really enjoyed this |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2010 Excellent. The radio tower scene? Nice. You only ever see that in fanart. |
restless-tempest chapter 1 . 4/27/2010 I really enjoyed this story, it was short and sweet. The descriptions were really involving too, I could get the feel of the story really well. And I also agree that I liked the way you handling the supposed 'Silver strips Kotone' scene. It was getting a bit annoying to see everyone say he stripped her when that didn't seem to be the case. This was a breath of fresh air in that aspect. |
ibuberu chapter 1 . 4/23/2010 Ah, this is great 3 I like how you expanded the brief conversation the player has with the rival in the radio tower - I could feel the tension and the hurt and everything. It was very interesting to read a serious piece on the radio tower scene, I'm used to seeing people laugh at the fact that Silver just strips the uniform off Kotone in the building, haha. Nice work (: |