Reviews for Saccharine
HybridDragoness chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
I wanted to write a oneshot similar to this. Never has enough depth when I think of it... Anyway, gorgeous writing; short and sweet too!

KHue~
Peachy Momo Chan chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I liked this story a lot!

And what made it a hole lot better is that I was listening 2 Samson by Regina Spektor

Her song starts off on how you ended your story!
epicBANG chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
How sweet!
To describe his feelings spot on in such a length was great! (:
(Not that it's a bad thing it's short!)
I really enjoyed this
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Excellent. The radio tower scene? Nice. You only ever see that in fanart.
restless-tempest chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I really enjoyed this story, it was short and sweet. The descriptions were really involving too, I could get the feel of the story really well.

And I also agree that I liked the way you handling the supposed 'Silver strips Kotone' scene. It was getting a bit annoying to see everyone say he stripped her when that didn't seem to be the case. This was a breath of fresh air in that aspect.
ibuberu chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Ah, this is great 3 I like how you expanded the brief conversation the player has with the rival in the radio tower - I could feel the tension and the hurt and everything. It was very interesting to read a serious piece on the radio tower scene, I'm used to seeing people laugh at the fact that Silver just strips the uniform off Kotone in the building, haha. Nice work (: