'Sniff'

You made me cry! This story is just so sad. Poor Drew, just a shell of a person. You should really write a sequel, perhaps from a different point of view!

Wow..This one-shot blew me away. Very beautifully written. It let out so many emotions. It was like I could feel what Drew was feeling. It's like I was there with him feeling all the pain he was. Your a very talented author. I love your style of writing. :)

The part where Drew was talking to himself and completely ignoring Roselia was hilarious. The last sentence of his whole 'talking to myself' speech made me feel like I was dieing from laughter! XD

Hmmm...I think I remember which episode that sentence is from. I can remember all of the episodes Drew appears in. I think it's Spontaneos Combusken if my memory serves me right. I'm not 100% sure though. :P

I love how you wrote the whole thing in Drew's POV. I don't read much story's like that. Perhaps you could make a sequel with May's POV? Because I know she's swooning over a certain someone. ;)

..I'm a bit late for asking...Don't ya think?

ManaManaphy

That was so good. Don't be sorry for the sadness you portrayed. You did well! I took a break from reading any FF of any kind and haven't watched any of the CS episodes since last year. BUT I KNOW THAT LINE. GRR. I JUST CAN'T REMEMBER WHICH EPISODE. LOL, see I didn't cheat and google it.. I will after this review is done :]

But congratz on moving me with your fanfic.

Hoping to read more,

Abii(:

PS. I really liked the scene where Drew was basically talking to himself and ignoring Roselia xD

Awh. :) Hmm well this was really nice! The last few paragraphs were ones that I really liked. Being honest, the beginning wasn't that STRONG, you know what I mean? I guess it was the way that you had it written or something but I didn't feel much of the emotions in the beginning. But yes, you definitely redeemed yourself in the last couple of passages. So good job. :)

It was a nice effect of using "he" most of the time instead of the name. Like, it creates this impersonal atmosphere—meaning that almost anyone can relate to it. :) I liked that. I also liked the way you didn't include any real dialogue (except for the part with Roselia). It all added, you know?

There were some unnecessary capitalizing and some parts that could be worded better. But all in all—it was a good read! :)

"The one who leaned against the wall in the shadows, watching her from afar as she stood center-stage. He was the one who chose to put her down rather than telling her how beautiful she was. He was the one who waved casually at her instead of holding her hand. He was the one who threw roses at her and hid behind a bullshit excuse that they were for her Beautifly. He was the one who walked away and didn't look back, when all he wanted to do was turn back around, grab her and shake her and scream until his lungs were sore and the shackles came off."

-Gosh I loved this passage! :D

Fairly well written! Good job, keep it up!

-Suzie x

*sobs*. This story is so cute...and it's so sad, too. Love it, though.

Gah, I so remember that episode! Spontaneous Combusken, right? Anyway, I love this story!

I don't even need to google this! It's carved into my brain

Drew: Sorry, but it looks like May messed up again.

Brock: Gee, Drew, why don't you tell us how you REALLY feel?

Spontaneous Combusken! :D

And I also loved this, even if it wasn't a happy ending. Yeah, Drew's totally the 'stay in the shadows for her happiness' kind of guy...makes me wanna cry a bit. JEEZ, May! Just go up to him and confess your undying love for him already!

Oh my gosh this was beautiful. Perfect. I love angst. X3

You characterized everyone PERFECTLY. You're the first person I've seen who's done the characterization so well. All of Drew's thoughts and feelings - as well as May's, Max's, Ash's, Brock's, and Roselia's, was wonderful. You gave a lot of insight on them. 8)

Drew and Roselia's conversation was HILARIOUS! First thing he says is he's the craziest person in the world... few moments later, he denies the very idea. Hehe. Indeed, Drew, she's poisoning you. It's just that you let her and you can't find a tangible cure. XD

I'm too lazy to find the name of the episode where Brock says that quote. But I already had that quote memorized, from the first time I heard it. It was too funny NOT to remember. XD

Oh Drew, you depressed lovable dope... you two will end up someday. No doubt bout that.

I seriously love your writing style. X33

Oh, and I read your profile~! Pokemon IS indeed an anime. It was NEVER a cartoon, just that soem people stereotyped it into that category because of America, and because it's aimed at younger audiences. It has and always will be an anime.

As for Ikarishipping, DP will be ending in about 4 months. I really don't think anything is happening. (I just felt the need comment, since I'm a Penguinshipper and have always despised Ikarishipping for how, frankly, blinded people are by its clicheness and how crack it is.)

I'm gonna add you to my favorites~! And again, I love this story! 8D

This was so insanely awesome. AUUUGHHH! THAT'S HOW INSANELY AWESOME IT IS

But, seriously, this was a really good fic! I love this genre (because angst is awesome and fun to say) and Pokémon is just supercool. I love how you described his love for her! IT IS SO PERFECT!

YAAY 4 POKéMON! ~Skitty

AWWWWWWWWWWW That was utterly mind blowing! I was about to cry the whole time and wanted to drag May straight into Drews arms because there is NO WAY any of Mays other suitors could ever love her as much as Drew! I wish I could write like that...

noooo! theyr'e not together! i HATE advanceshipping! NO OFFENSE!

this was a.m.a.z.i.n.g!

i loved every bit of it, it actually hurt to read some passages of the story and THAT'S saying something!

great job, please write more like this one .

I really liked this fic. You did a great job in portraying the way Drew is feeling. I can relate, from a female point of view, to his predicament so I think you got it spot on. :) I especially liked the way you closed the story - though sad, it was realistic rather than being some sappy ending that wouldn't have matched with the tone of the story. Your writing was excellent, descriptive and emotional.

Nice job, hope to see more from you soon. :)

Aw... THAT. WAS. SO. SWEET! I mean how you described Drew's feelings were, SUPERB! I really hope you keep it up!

-Reika

awh that was really sad,poor drew... i can be yours though drew! hahahah! just joking wouldn't steal him from may!