awwww please finish! please tell me what happens! omg! I love this fanfic so much! please continue! maybe u could pick it up when Alice is older I dunno but please I'm dying here

Alice should find out the truth about Mary and how Mary is using her. I think The adults should find out about her soon

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Read all 79 chapters and the story could be told in 10. Plus I'm not happy about the leniency these families have towards a 15yr old pressuring a 13 yr old with mental health issues into an abusive sexual relationship - and I'm used to age of consent being 16 in UK and 15 in France. In the UK the boy could be charged with statutory rape.

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Thank you for dedicating this chapter to mwa!

I really like this chapter because you can clearly see how Ali's taking charge for once!

-Kiwi

I've read it 3 times! Completely in love with this chapter!

Xxx-Kiwi

AHHHH! CHARLIIII! Words can't explain I just..I just love this so much! It's absolutly amazing your a fantastic writer!Please update soon or I might die! I love it so much. Your so talented. I like how Ali is taking charge for once and how you take on an almost completely diffrent personality for Ali and Jasper.

Well done it's really great!

Xxx-Kiwi
(Yep! New account but my sign off is the same! haha!)

Awesome chapter :)

Thank you so much for updating, I really really like this story. Can next chapter you put their ages in top? I forget sometimes! That Mara is big trouble, I see jasper falling for her antics... Stand strong Alice! Even when jasper lets you down.

I was just about to log off when I saw your update. I love how much Jasper has grown in this chapter. He is trying so hard to be what Alice and everyone wants. He is blind when it comes to Mara and I'm afraid that blindness is going to bite him in the butt. I'm a little disappointed in Alice. She expecets Jasper to make all of the changes and while she claims he's controlling her, she's really doing that to him. Even Rose is worried about Jasper being set up for more heart break from Alice. Alice either needs to end it for good or really give Jasper a 2nd chance. I still say that when he finds out all that she's done behind his back after expecting total honesty from him- Alice may be the one crawling on hands and knees for forgiveness.

My thoughts are with you in this tough time. I hope things get better soon. I love this story and hope I get to read more soon.

Wishing you all the best xx keep up the good work! xx

I love Alice and jasper fanfics and found this he other day. I am really enjoying it and hope you update soon.

Hey! Look who it is! It's been a real long time hasn't it! I'm sorry...I was busy, family troubles and what not! Just wanteed to tell you. This is amazing. I can't forgive myself for just leaving you! I hope your okay! I have read your other fics,they are fantastic too! Your just...AMAZING! :D Talk to you soonm hopefully!