OOh! Soooo close! Darn it! Darn it! *cough* Excuse me while i go to my emo corner and sulk.

Great story. You followed through with it perfectly... Sorry, perfect is not a good enough word. Your following through was better than perfect. Great work!

A rather lovely piece of work. I like the enigmatic feel and the point if view it's written it. Well done!

Sora(:

Wow. No grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. You're a genius. I like shrouded mystery-like fanfictions. Just like a ninja. Very nice.

...that was depressing.

It was very well-written though.

Ok, so i think this is really well written! I'm not really sure about the character's personality.. but im also not as into pokemon as you are :P but while reading this it's very clear why kind of people they are, and the style is very fitting! i love how it has humor but yet it's sort of depressing, too :D once again, i think it's very well written! the only thing i can think of that could have been more specific was maybe mentioning how or why he was dying.

3 mezzo

Haven't seen you around for awhile, Clover!

Well, this was interesting. Was a bit thrown off my feet by the kids comments, because I just figured they were still in their teens. I also would have liked to know why Gold is dying, and how. It's all a bit vague, even though I'm sure that was your intention.

Sad that he doesn't find out Crystal's name, but on the other hand, he does Silver's, and that makes me weirdly happy. :) I liked the comment about his entangled hair, it seems to suit his mood and all at the moment.

~Snoaz

Nice oneshot! Enjoyed what was going through Gold's head.

This is written decently enough, but feels completely generic.