First of all, I gotta say, your English is brilliant, so no worries there! I love your writing style, too, and your characterization of Dragunov. Keep it up! :)

i cant belive it story brilliant it felt right 4 once

Eeergh...

Well, it was good...

Nice XD

It's better than draguanna xp

Or dragufina ( zafina ).

Well, at least still make sense...

Dyadya who live in war background and Nina who live in it

as well. It's somehow match XD

And also, Nina here really reminds me with my struck mother xp

But I like it.

grammar is not bad too

Keep it up XD

Been a while since I've read this, but felt like adding some comments anyway.

This is really well done. I can't believe you're not a natural English speaker; you make very few mistakes, especially compared to some of the other Italian authors on this site (and some of the American ones too ;) ).

I like how you present the danger amidst the intimacy here, and the DragxNina pairing is one I've pondered over many times before, so it's great to see someone taking the initiative and making a story out of it.

Good work, and hope you keep writing!

Xx i love this story...also crazy bout the pairing, love DragxNina

I hate the couple but the story is good _!

well, this is a good story.

Nina is my fave character..