Honestly, this is worth reading for the dialogue at tue end. I love their verbal sparring more than anything else. Great! :)

Hee! I just found and read this and it is so damn adorable! I was grinning through the whole thing. Can't wait to read more!

I'm really enjoying this. I do like Gene's internal dialogue.

Wowee... what a fic! You are amazing at Galex :)

Thank you so much! Gene being a gentleman is awesome :)

Jazzola :)

That was fantastic! Hot and sexy yet full of emotion too, and you really get into their minds! I love it - I do hope there's a Part 3!

'oh, hell, he couldn't even come up with a properly juicy metaphor at the moment.'
Fabulous follow on from 'Taste of the Moment', and I particularly loved this line :)

Awesome! Truly, truly AWESOME :D Lol. Are you going to write any more? Because you capture both Gene & Alex perfectly and I would love to see where you could take them.
Dinny
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That is brilliant!

Gem x

Now this is how it's done! It's wonderful what a good writer can do with less than 1400 words :)

AH-MAZ-ING ) XX

Love this follow on T.O.T.M. ! Hot, sexy and funny. I adore your writing style. . . will there be a part 3? ;)

Absolutely fantastic, a brilliant follow up to the previous part, I loved it! This doesn't need to be 'M' though, it's perfectly fine as a 'T'...well, if I'm wrong, a few of mine should be M too...:S

Loved it to pieces! Will there be more? X D

What a gent...sometimes i don't know how he resisted for so long.

brill!

any chance of a 3rd? maybe the night before the morning after *wink wink* :P

I love the way you do both pov's without too much overlap

Very very good :)

I was hoping there might be a bit more to that kiss, and this is lovely. But please don't leave it there. You know what to do next ;)