Reviews for Errata
Guest chapter 5 . 9/27/2019
Any chance you will update this because this is awesome
Guest chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
This is awesome you got sephiroth really in character.
Please update it. thank you
HeartOfChaos13 chapter 2 . 3/13/2018
I like this chapter and Is the world they are In a final fantasy World?.
HeartOfChaos13 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
I like this chapter and I think that this story seems Interestning.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/6/2018
We’d love to see more! I know it’s been...only years but we’d love you to come back to this anytime.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/12/2017
I know it’s been years, but so many of us are still waiting for you to continue this fic! It’s such a wonderful and compelling story about these two equally amazing and complex characters! Plus, us Sephiroth x Terra fans gotta stick together! :D

Have you been keeping up with the news for the Dissidia Final Fantasy NT game that’s coming out next year?! THE GRAPHICS ARE INCREDIBLE! The characters look so beautiful! I really forward to the story that’s being told in the game, even though there’s no “story mode”. If you haven’t heard of it, please check it out! Sephiroth and Terra look so awesome with the new HD animation!
gelfling chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Hah! I really like how this starts, for a potential 'death scene' it's very matter-of-fact and a little funny.
nehima chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
Don't let this fic die!
greg chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
this is really good.
cassidy chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
LOVE it it's brilliant im getting my friends to read this :)
Kirby-Chan chapter 5 . 3/20/2012
My gosh! This story is written so well! Are you ever going to finish it? Please do!
Loviepuppy chapter 5 . 2/22/2012
I REALLY love this story! One of my friends pointed this one out to me and said I had to read. I become obsessed over it in just a couple minutes of reading it. PLEASE update it soon! :D
FullMentalPanic chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
It's seems like you've really thought out how you want Terra and her Esperness to be a part of this story and I approve. Sephiroth is very interesting, caluculating, manipulative, and ruthless. He doesn't try to attack Terra because he knows he can just manipulate her verbally. The way it is now though, it seems like Terra will only kill to save herself, but won't kill to save another person. For instance, Sephiroth may have just offed an innocent person, it's not the first time, and it probably won't be the last, but she won't eliminate him. You're really going to have to work to make me feel like Terra shouldn't kill him.
FullMentalPanic chapter 4 . 7/14/2011
I really liked how you just skipped the fight between Seph and Terra completely and left it all implied, it was an interesting literary touch. Sephiroth calling the Emperor and co. amateurs really cracked me up. Amateurs at taking over cosmic powers, it just really appealed to my sense of humor. Really creepy how he casually asseses causalties and deems them few though.

It's so weird how Terra and Sephiroth beat eachother up and then still act civil towards each other. Keiran's still alive, wow, I totally thought you were going to have killed by the Titan.
FullMentalPanic chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
Forgot to say, I particularly liked the chapter title of the last one, Terra's not really human and Sephiroth has his inhuman aspects. Kudos for doing all the chapter titles in Latin. Who says it's dead!

You know if one person involved can levitate and the other has all the enhancements Jenova cells, mako injections, and Shinra can buy, it doesn't seem very possible that the former could fall off a ladder and the latter wouldn't have the presence of mind or skill to step out of the way. I do like how Terra magic skills are coming into play though.

I like the indication that Seph is starting to see her on more equal terms when he sits down across from her, and enjoyed the comparison between the different FF worlds. Alien genes, so much in common.

I really love how Terra and Sephiroth are coming at the power to be unleashed from the tower from completely different angles. Terra really gets more admirable in this chapter, the explanation of her courage slipping away makes her sympathetic, and it's a great moment when she stands up to Sephiroth.
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