| Reviews for The Unexpected |
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   Cosmic Nihilist chapter 11 . 8/14/2018 I am about half way through the story. its very good and well written, but the summary is very misleading. Up til this Chapter Vegeta has been such a passive character while the summary advertised it as a Vegeta-centric story. I will keep reading to the end, but to be honest he hasn't done really anything throughout the story, just kinda stood there. Only about 30 percent of the story has been from his perspective while the other 70 from Bulma's. I have no trouble with that, but the summary of the story should be changed to reflect it. |
| smar0403 chapter 21 . 10/29/2016 I loved it read it all through the night till early morning great story |
| Amalley chapter 21 . 10/7/2016 This isn't seriously one of the most intriguing , and well written stories I've ever read . Thank you ! |
| MarcellaDuchamp chapter 21 . 9/19/2016 This story really got good after the reveal of Bulma's Saiyan origin! I loved the space adventure, wish there was more planet exploration. |
| dragonDraw chapter 21 . 5/26/2015 Amazing story I loved it :3 |
| MAL chapter 10 . 12/7/2014 I saw this coming from chapter 3ish. but I like how you brought it to light. Very, very nicely done. But, I am very curious... how did the tail come back? I will read on to see if my answer is in the details! I like her with a tail, never read a fic like this before. yayyayay |
| MAL chapter 3 . 12/6/2014 I really, really enjoied the start of the chapter, and the entire chapter, but especially the start. |
| the slinky chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 wow , really nice |
| VegetaXBulma3 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 Love it! |
| Curlyquills chapter 21 . 10/13/2013 Wow. I loved this story. And the insights of the Saiyan culture you included were fantastic. It is great seeing a story like this that is so far from the original storyline but remain believable. |
| deddie123 chapter 21 . 8/27/2013 This was a nice story I really enjoyed it. It was very unexpected with bulma and vegeta but I like the concept of the story line. Keep up the good work ! |
| ImaginaryInk chapter 21 . 9/29/2012 Really unexpected. So uncanon like and it is kinda refreshing! I like the name Daikon. Great fic. Love it. |
| smalsa chapter 10 . 7/25/2012 OMG in all honesty I thought she would be some other species a hybrid maybe! But I was so wrong! This story only gets better! |
| smalsa chapter 9 . 7/25/2012 Ahhh It's driving me crazy I need to know what's wrong with her and loooool at your authors not oh no you didn't ;) |
| smalsa chapter 6 . 7/25/2012 She's not human I'm pretty sure about that! I don't think she's a sayain either maybe something closely related, I'm sure I'll soon find out! |
