| Reviews for August Rose |
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ae2000x chapter 1 . 12/2/2019 I am itnrigued by 1, 2 and 3. |
RadioRacer chapter 1 . 10/3/2012 The way you write Azula is just perfection. You make her human without it being cheesy and (angst angst oh woe is me for I am so painfully misunderstood angst). Just believable. Love it! |
HerGoldenWings chapter 1 . 10/3/2012 So well written! (: Loved every word. |
VampireApple chapter 1 . 8/10/2012 Really impressed with this one. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 That ending was so creepy. |
EscapetoMusic chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 I really like azula, and even though she went crazy and was a murderous sadistic monster, she had to have a heart in there somewhere. she never really had a chance to not be sadistic, being how she was so heavily influenced by her father. I like the parts that you put in that showed her questioning herself a little, because it shows that she knows-unintentionally- that she has turned into some sort of a monster. |
PeppermintPeople chapter 1 . 5/10/2012 No sequel? I'll just have to live with what awesomeness you did write THIS IS PURE GENIUS. And also, the wiki got it wrong.(not sure about the Nick site. haven't checked it yet) Azula is older than Zuko. |
therentyoupay chapter 1 . 7/25/2011 Intense! |
HeyI'mTalkingToYou chapter 1 . 8/29/2010 This is awesome! It is so hard to write a convincing Azula, but you definitely did. Good job! |
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 1 . 8/24/2010 I loved this, nice work! |
Masquerading with Shadows chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 I liked this :). I liked the idea, and the little snapshots into Azula's mind. I also like the ending, and how it leaves intrigue. You also wrote her character pretty well :). |
past-the-pacific chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 Whoa, you wrote something for A:tLA? And about Azula? This made my day :D The way you write the "flawed" characters is uncomfortably real, you know that right? This is Azula how I imagine her. Vicious, and twisted but human. The ending sent shivers down my spine, no lie. This was absolutely brilliant especially how she's not quite as controlled and strong as she thinks she is during the scene with the guard. That little bit of anger and vunerability was devastating (which I hope was actually there and I didn't just totally read that part wrong). I'm so happy you started writing again, especially for this fandom. It's hard to find anything worth reading in it, which is such a shame. I've always loved Avatar (regardless of the fact that it's technically a kid's cartoon) and Azula has always been one of my favorites. You got her dead on, that's honestly all I can say. Your writing speaks for itself (witnessed in the fact that I've never given any one author this many reviews before). |
awolfofredmoon chapter 1 . 5/13/2010 not bad i like the small tidbits of azula's life |
Thezyman chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 Fantastically dead on, it's the real Azula for sure! I always thought Azula's ending wasn't right. In today's culture, stories with evil characters always have that redemption in the end. Redemption or Death. During the series it seemed to hint that Azula could have some good in her still, but they just made her crazy. This story is better than any I could think up. Its great, don't change it but the only two things that pops out are "news report" and "medication." I don't think that there would be a News report, maybe an official statement or a doctor's assumption or rumors but idk if the culture had daily news to report. No biggie. Medication is alright but probably more likely to be Herbal Medicines rather than using the word medication. But don't change it. |
xGraybackx chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 I like sensual Azula. I actually really hated how canon Azula is so awkward with boys. It just doesn't click with her personality. Azula is always dripping with sex, wherever or whatever she doing. Good job, this is exactly how I imagined her to conduct he escape plan. |