You have to love Abby. Well done!

Very, very sweet :)

wow- i love your stories- this is another gem- keep writing- and i agree with you- lets just read lots of fanfic with them already together- maybe TPTB will finally get a clue about those two!

i absolutly love this story! its such an intimate yet fluffy and sweet scene, it was absoultly beautiful!:D

absolutely adorable. McAbby all the way. I'm waiting for that episode too!

Oh that was just magic! Tim and Abby are together in my world too. I'm sure one of these days on the show they're just gonna say that they've been together for a while and just haven't let anyone in on the secret. Great story. You should continue it. Thanks :)

You're right - there isn't nearly enough McAbby these days. Great job.

Another great McAbby story - I agree I'd give my unborn children for a McAbby love story on the show - but it doesn't look like it will happen, so you just need to keep writing stories that feed the need. Thank you

Such a beautiful story! I've kinda given up hope for any McAbby-progress on the show too, but stories like these give me hope! They've got something pretty special, so let's just hope the writers acknowledge this too? I hope to see more McAbby-fic from you...

So cute:)

I always love your pieces of fanfiction, it actually always a ppears at the perfect moment. Keep writing!

Very good! I really like how you wrapped it around the episode and Abby's explanations were great!

AW! at how cute this whole fic chapter was (even though I have seen only a minuscule little video clip from early season seven and nothing more yet here in Third World South Africa, where we were always ten lunar months or more behind, in the days when dinosaurs still roamed the earth where JAG was concerned, and nowadays where NCIS, its spinoff, is concerned.).