Is it on hold or something?
Please update soon :D

love the story so far. so cant wait for the next chapter.

nice

a killer sasuke

weewwwww

please do update _

i love your story! hope you update soon!:D

oh man, I wonder why Kiba is so set on hating Sasuke. Oh well, I wonder what Shikamaru and Shino think about Sasuke.

yup yup gotta love Good Will XD

please update soon!

i like this story its dark

nice

Alrighty! I've decided to stick with this one (if you decide to continue updating it as it has been awhile). I like where you are going with this, and I like the OOC nature of Sasuke and Naruto... it's slight, but it works well. I noticed a few issues with the technical side of your story... So I'm going to offer my few observations from the first four chapters.

First I noticed some comma issues... there was comma splicing and a few missing commas here and there. Nothing major to worry about, but if you were wanting to fix the grammar, then you'd want to look into them.

In the second chapter, you had some time jumps from one period to the other... going from the school to gym; you may want to put some sort of transition marker there. Just a suggestion.

You also had some repetitive language in the second chapter, best example being remaining and remain used in the same sentence. It's normally something that makes a sentence stagnate.

I also noticed several instances in chapter 2 and 3 where you had miss use of the forms "there" "their" and "they're"... which are grammatical pet peeves for me. Again, it may not be an issue for some people, but I try to mention everything I notice when I review.

Also, when you were discussing their music tastes... not everyone will know what MSI stands for, so you might just want to says "Mindless Self Indulgence", because when people talk about the band, or at least when I am discussing it, we normally say the full name... not MSI. Again, just a suggestion.

There were some places where I think words were missing, like where Sasuke tells Naruto he's eating too fast. I think you meant to say "slow down" but all you have is "should down".

I think you used the word "seamed" in one place and it should be "seemed".

Technical issues aside, I really like the potential of this story, the fact that Sasuke is a serial killer. It's a very nice way to give Naruto a sort of dark twist (like the Showtime series Dexter). I like the characterization and the thought processes. Everything seems to meld together for the most part, there were a few pronoun association issues... but it was all very good. I hope you update soon, because I'd like to see where this is headed... without having to deal with Sakura.

Excellent work.

awesome story. can't wait to see if you publish another chapter and if you do can't wait to read it.

ohh naruto is going to realize that sasuke is a killer

Haha, nice fic.

hey just wanna let u know i love this story. sasuke drunk is so amusing...and i like the second sentence better. so bone chilling!