Muwhahahahaha! That was excellent... :) at first I felt sorry for Jayden but the more I read the more I found it hot.

What the fuck is this shit?... LOL

:O I... don't know what to say except.. I may love you. -fapfapfap-

Loved it.

I ment another. Sorry '

I love this story so much. Please make anote chapter! :)

I'm not sure I've ever read rape more skillfully written than this. You have my admiration.

Some people just don't like Jayden and Blake slash, (maybe that's partly because that's basically all there is on , with the exception of a few good stories) it doesn't make them homophobic retards.

You are my hero...a fanfic that involves Blake, Jayden, handcuffs, evilness, blowjobs, spanking *brain overload* When Blake asked Jayden if he was an animal in need of taming or a child that needs spanking...I shivered. You write so vividly, and so in-character, but never cliché! I adore you, and there's nothing you can do about it! :)

I gotta say, the best part of this fic was your A/N at the beginning.

I don't know what it is about Jayden that makes him so damn rapable, but I love it and I loved this.

Oh. My. God. I was so hoping you'd write more of this pairing, it's my favourite pairing ever, I don't know why. And you, my friend, is such an amazing writer! You make me squee out loud! I love how you capture the perfect feelings between these two; Blake's manliness and brutalness and oh my. I also love the way you write, and phrases like "creating the illusion that he was being met halfway" are just so...I don't even have a word for it! :D And I have to admit that I've secretly wanted a blowjob scene like that between these two, hehee. :) Sorry for the rant, I just wanted to let you know how much I adore this! Hoping to see more, because I just can't get enough! ;D

God, do I love these! As far as I'm concerned, there can never be to much of this pairing. I especially loved the blowjob and spanking scenes. :)

Aw...I just want to hug poor Norman. Blake's a real ass. *huggles Norman*

Also this was more sad than smutty but that's what you were aiming for right?

Oh, so brutal! x_x

I sobbed at the end; poor Jayden. As much as I love slash between these two, rape is inevitable, and I should have seen this coming, ahaha.

I liked this story, as savage as it is. : D