A great story, I couldn't stop reading it

Awe...as corny and sappy that ending was, I absolutely loves it lol. It made up and paired nicely with all the angst and misery you put me through! ;) I love the whole squint squad catching them during their little ‘slideshow’ of affections and when Hodgins and Sweets were openly discussing Booth’s confidence and bravado for sex with Brennan and how she made that comment. I couldn’t help myself, I just had to laugh you’re an excellent writer, and I’m truly enjoying going through your archive of Bones fanfiction. You have such a way with words, and the way you describe the feelings of both of the lovebirds is just exceptional. You characterize them perfectly, and that’s one part that makes stories and plot lines works the way they do so well. I can’t wait to move on to your next one! There hasn’t been one I haven’t liked :)

Oh I loved Sweets in this one. He was such a kind and compassionate friend (as he always is, even though he can seem kinda shrinky meddly, but honestly, I love him that way too ;) ) and I loved the way he just tried his best to comfort and soothe Brennan. He may be teased and he may seem selfish sometimes, but Sweets is one of my favorites, and I think everyone loves him much more than they let on, especially Booth and Brennan. I love seeing Sweets in fanfiction like this 3

And that's what all Bones fans want...for Booth & Brennan to be together & live happily ever after. This was a fantastic story. I think you captured both my fave characters perfectly, especially Booth. It felt as though I was getting an inside, up close & personal view of his innermost feelings throughout this story. I could feel his love for her. Towards the end, when Brennan started to allow herself to realize that what she felt for Booth was love, was beautiful. Definitely Bonsey. And very Boothy. It's one of those stories that I hate to see end. Awesome job. Thanks for sharing.

This was wonderful. I can take a little angst (or a lot in this case:) as long as it's followed up with some B&B fluffiness such as this. A little bit of Pops & Parker is always welcomed:)

Yes, yes, yes! Finally...in the same place at the same time. This right here is why I read Bones FF. Great writing, great stories, & my fave couple together.

Yes, please let this be the time. Let her tell him that it was not a dream this time, that she is indeed in love with him. He needs this right now. And Parker talking to, pleading with, & praying for his dad? How sweet & heart wrenching was that?

Booth is a fighter, especially when it comes to those he loves. He is a god man. He deserves to be happy with the woman he loves. Right? Hive me some happiness in this next chapter.

Jesus, that was too intense. Way too intense. You've gottn me to the edge of my seat, & then just let me fall off the cliff. Both shot? Really? That was harsh. I need my babies to be OK. And poor Parker...to have this happen on his birthday celebration? Harsh!

Yeah, that was cruel. I'm so glad this story's finished, because that was an evil cliffie. Gotta say, poor Booth again. The guy can't catch a break. He'll blame himself for this.

These two just crush my heart. I just want to scoop Booth up into one of those famous guy hugs that's not a guy hug. I just want to scoop them both up, slip out, & leave them together. They're killing me here.

Ouch. That was the worst case scenario at the worst possible time. That would seem unsalvageable to me. Poor Booth. Even though she didn't know Zbooth's was watching/listening, I can't believe she just said yes. I think that hurt me more than Booth. Plus, I never saw those two going anywhere.

I've been breezing through this story, but had to stop & comment here. Yes the first part was hilarious. But this last part was so steamy. First I felt for her, thinking Booth had redeveloped a sexual relationship with Cam, & being jealous of that occurance. But the rant that her jealousy encurred, teasing him about what benefits they would reap by having sex together, was nothing short of cruel. Tell him no to a relationship, but then tease him with innuendos of sex was totally cruel. These two (Brennan) need to get it together. This is a wonderful story. You gave captured all of them so true to character. It's amazing.

I think this was an important chapter and only benefits the story. Great work.

I read this entire story over the past few days. Enjoyed it very much.