| Reviews for failures of flight |
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LunarBeast77 chapter 1 . 4/26/2019 Andthe Guest who said "No tears shed for Roxas here", yes I 100% agree with you here |
LunarBeast77 chapter 1 . 4/26/2019 I love your writing, but I still don't understand why Roxas didnt just leave with Axel when his Mum wants to move. The ending just... felt a bit forced, y'know? |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2016 I... I can't... How..? |
apiegohome chapter 1 . 8/28/2015 I really enjoy chronological stories, and I loved how you wrote this. Oh man my hearts hurts though. Great story. Thanks for writing! |
Teknogeddon chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 You're going to make me cry man. Not cool. :( |
TapTiger chapter 1 . 12/27/2012 Well. I should really check the genre of fictions for tragedy more often so a sad ending like this doesnt catch me so thoroughly off guard. Brilliant stuff! Truth is I'm not even int rox-axel pairing but the fiction written about it is f the highest quality! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 No tears shed for Roxas here. He had it all in his hands and watched it slip right through his fingers. Honestly if someone was so important to me that I was willing to elope with them and drop everything that I currently had in my life, then why in the world would I bother going with my mom? Why not just go with them? New York's so big I won't be running into my mom for quite a while, and when I do, I would most likely be settled in the new life enough to tell her, "Hey, I'm with someone now and I'm happy, so let me live my life." She probably wouldn't have cared anyway. Big logic flaw right there. But maybe that's just me. Maybe I'm a little smarter and I remember to let people I love know that I love them so I don't lose them in that stupid way. I feel sorrier for Axel and Sora, at the end of the day. |
kendraduck09 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012 I am crying so hard now, my heart feels like it was just ripped from my chest and stomped on. This story is so beautiful, yet so, so tragic at the same time. Now I'm left to wonder what Roxas does after he just walks away. What a great thing to come home to, looking for your best friend who you love so much, only to find out he's dead. My best friend left exactly how Roxas did, with very little warning. She moved back home to Thailand, because that's the country she was born in and where all her family lives. She moved in January... it's August and I haven't spoken to her in 8 months, and I have no idea if I ever will again. I've left her so many messages, with none of them being returned, only to later find her Skype and Facebook deactivated. It's been so painful for me, trying to move on losing my best friend who was like a sister to me. Ok, it's not exactly how it was with Axel and Roxas, but still. I miss her so much. I honestly don't know why just poured my heart and all my problems in a review, but I guess it's just fitting. |
Unicorn of death chapter 1 . 7/18/2012 Dude. You just terrified my parents. I came out of my bedroom crying and they thought that something was really really wrong. I feel like I was just shot. I feel empty and angry and confused. I've only ever had that feeling a couple of times through fanfiction, and I hate it/love it/hate it. It hurts. You are amazing. I'm still trying to process that there won't be a happy ending. I knew very early on that there won't be a happy ending, and yet... I'm still stuck on the fact that Axel is gone (he's not dead, he's not dead, he's NOT dead) and now I just feel... everything. I feel everything, all at once. I don't actually review stories very often, and I especially don't often leave gushy reviews all about my shitty feelings and whatever, so this is special. You are special. You not writing any more would be a crime against fanfiction, against writing, against the entire world of creativity and the art of spinning stories and trapping people within them. Please, I ask you this as a fellow author, ignore any and all idiots who say shit to you, and just focus on overly-emotional readers like me, who fall in love with your stories and always want more. ...I can't believe I just spilled all that emotion on my keyboard. I probably broke my laptop. Unicorn of death |
The Infernal Lady chapter 1 . 6/15/2012 Amazing story. I cried so hard reading this... |
dontcareanymore1234 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 So, I've been looking for amazing AkuRoku stories. Keep checking the page every day, and then I realized I seriously had to go back in time to find some good stuff. This is absolutely amazing, and is one of the reasons why I bawled for a good ten minutes afterwards. Beautiful writing, through and through. Love it. Great work :] |
Nightraven831 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 OMG SUPER SAD! Was Axel's body ever found? I hav so many questions about how Roxas lived out the rest of his life and stuff like tht. I almost cried when I heard the confession from Roxas and about what happened to Axel. _ DANG IT AXEL WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND GET CAPRURED! |
Reiyla chapter 1 . 2/6/2012 I just cried my eyes out. The way you write and the detail is amazing. It felt so real and it really hurt. I'm sitting here making up my own happy ending because it really was just tragic. I love how you destined there love with never really saying it and not ruining it by making it perfect, it's all te faults in the characters that make it so relatable and real and fuck I'm still crying. Anyways. Thank you for sharing this. |
NJKHBJGVSBDFHKJFG chapter 1 . 1/26/2012 Dammit. Why do I never freaking check the genre? I was not expecting my heart to be ripped out of my chest like that. Ugh. This fic is bloody amazing. |
Tofuu chapter 1 . 12/28/2011 This story makes me wanna bawl my fucking eyes out and stab myself in the chest several times to end this suffering. |