Great story

Just for the heck of it: Johnny Carson was born in Iowa and raised in Nebraska. He has always refuted the speculation that he is somehow related to "Kit" Carson. Your "Jonny Nevada" made me think of the late, great Mr. Carson. Your story has an interesting take on SM's deep, abiding love for WW. Makes one wonder what "Lois" thinks/feels at the worldwide celebration of SMWW's marriage especially with the potential of 1000s of years of that marriage. Someday people would say "What's a 'Lois Lane?'" The children would be Earth's greatest protectors. On a guess SM would would raise them on a farm with the same vaiues instilled into him by Ma & Pa Kent while WW teaches them what she knows.

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There are a number of language-type errors which would have been solved by a professional print editor. All-in-all it's a very good story. It demonstrates the depths of a man's love for his One True Love. I think most of us are searching for that kind of love-I still am. I would imagine that a fair number of readers would prefer a "happily ever after" ending but the haters (who DON'T need politics) would be terrified to their souls. What if Kara finds a Kryptonian husband? Would those kids be more or perhaps less terrifying? Will SMWW adopt new civilian ID's? So many questions...! Is a sequel necessary? The SMWW fan in me screams "YES!" but the realist says "probably not."

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Selfishly I wished that there were more glimpses into their together as husband and wife, especially with the public now being aware of their relationship. Also, I would not have minded the introduction of their children, witnessing Diana and Kal raising super powered hybrid Amazon/Kyptonian babies would have clinched it and made it full circle for me.

I thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Nice story.

And that is why the pre flashpoint clark was an idiot similar to dumbledore and always choosing the easy way instead of right and that is why he is easy to turn into villain by writers e.g. Injustice game

Wow! this kind of surprising me that you made their marriage known to the public. But I like it anyway. Love the story so far. Thanks for sharing!

Wow! Nice chapter here. I really like the way you described Diana's personality by divided her soul into 3 different fragments. That brings new aspect of vision to me. Thanks for sharing beautiful story.

And now I'm getting a glimpse of "What Dreams May Come"... ;)

And then The 21st century Hercules is starting the 12 labors all over again...(Don't know why I said this, but it just popped up in my head LOL)

Woah! Damn! just... DAMN!

That is one hell of a story if I say so myself. The wording is amazing to say the least.

Gotta love that last sentence

Beautiful story I thank you for the time and effort that you put into this wonderful story!

Hi.

While I wasn't really that enamoured about the last few chapters that describe Clark and Diana's Journey through the realm of the dead and gods, it's much the opposite for the rest of this story. This has been an unique tale to read, because it does show, in a rather realistic way, how the relationship between Clark and Lois could develop several years down the line. You did very well, showing that they never were equals, no matter how much they both wished or pretended to be.

It also doesn't hurt that I've always been rooting quietly for Superman and Wonder Woman ;)