this is the last fic of yours that I read and you keep making me love everything about your stories! Your Vegeta is by far my favourite one in every single story you include him. You suggested me most of the headcanons and interpretations about him and other characters I've come to elaborate, I really agree about the dynamics and situations among characters you built. I really admire you and how you create scenes. Thank you so much for your work

This is a great story. I read it a few years ago, it's still as good as I remember

ohh! so nostalgic! I really live scooby doo and blues clues!

I can't believe the Gohan that once attacked Vegeta is so openly cowed by him now, it simply isn't believable that at this age Gohan would be this much of a simpering coward to someone he's probably still stronger than.

fucking awesome story. love coming back and reading this again.

This was absolutely perfect. I loved Vegeta being a father figure, but still being aloof like his normal personality. This was wonderfully written, thank you so much

I think you represented the characters well, and I really appreciated that time was put in to the grammar and spelling.

Oh man, this was such a great, enjoyable story—you really built up the bond (though I’m sure Vegeta would deny it) between Vegeta and Gohan well; I loved watching them work together to get through his problem. And everyone else’s presence, too! They were supportive and exactly as they were in the show. Great read.

Super sweet ending loved the BV ,moments with Trunks

I think this is the 3rd time I'm reading the story and every time I just love it. Thank you for writing it!

I like the relationship you built up for Gohan and Vegeta, but I love the relationship you have portrayed between Vegeta and his son even more! I was wondering what was Gohan going to do about the display he saw on Trunks wanting Vegeta's regonizsation, will you do a sequel to this story? Maybe how Vegeta help Trunks to go through the same thing when he's older? Such an interesting piece! Thank you so much for sharing!

The talk Vegeta has with Trunks is just too adorable, especially when Trunks tried his best not to cry and had Vegeta all loving, literally one of the best DBZ stories of all time (second to your Point of No Return imho)! I look forward to read more from you you talented lady

Loved this!

Oh ! This one is even better !
The characters are very IC and you could almost imagine it happening after Cell Saga.
Thank you for you wonderful work :)

Amazing fic! Such good writing- little to no typos. I love it!

I especially love watching Vegeta's character development, from not wanting to be involved to cautiously looking into it to taking Gohan into his house, trying not only to protect the world from Gohan, but to protect Gohan from himself.

I hope there's some hardcore angst up ahead where Vegeta has to comfort Gohan or at least help him though painful side effects.

I also love how you write Vegeta- he's not some heartless rage monster, he's a person who's had a very rough life and painful existence and is trying to do right by his family. He's grown to be a much more understanding, better person, and you write him perfectly.

Anyways, onto the next chaoter! :)