Never mind, this is my favorite :D I like how Sue changed from heartless Coach Sylvester to be caring Sue the Mom, because even the coldest of women can be the greatest of mothers. The hug was just perfect an d I got a pang in my heart. I'm not sure whether it was a happy heart pang or a sad one, but your work is amazing nontheless.

I love this story!

Be careful with ambiguous pronoun references. Sometimes I had to reread sentences to figure out which she was which, and it took me out of the moment.

Thanks for another great installment of this mother-daughter narrative.

This is so sad. I love your stories especially the sunshine girls series and the sue and Brittany ones.

Very sweet. Pushing the borders of believability a bit, but good nonetheless.

b/c i'm too lazy to sign in...lol I really, really liked this one! Great job :D