| Reviews for Daybreak |
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   mizbluff chapter 50 . 6/6 brilliant story. it sucked me in big time! looking forward to last couple chapters answering a few questions but otherwise beautifully done |
| vitoria160599 chapter 50 . 1/10 continue please i love this story |
| BookloverStar chapter 50 . 8/21/2019 I love this story but when is the next chapter! We’ve been waiting years! I need more! |
| karen4honor chapter 50 . 8/5/2019 Thank you for your story! Even though it's not "officially" marked complete, it's at a great stopping point and I enjoyed it immensely! |
| karen4honor chapter 45 . 8/5/2019 I'm totally intrigued at this development... |
| twiclare chapter 50 . 7/26/2019 What a lovely story! |
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/24/2019 The time table is super confusing. If it’s the approximate time Bella went to Port Angeles, why are they attempting the baseball game? |
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/24/2019 The premise of this is interesting, but I feel cheated that we haven’t experienced this Edward and Bella get to know one another. They’ve barely met, had the meadow scene and are hanging out in Edward’s room. What are they doing? How is their relationship proceeding? Show us. |
| Tjputvin chapter 50 . 7/21/2019 Just wanted to pop in and let you know how much I’m enjoying re-reading this! So well written and an amazing alternative to Meyers world! I hope someday this hits your radar again and you finish |
| boopgirl chapter 50 . 4/26/2019 Glad this stopped at a good place...will you continue it? |
| Elise de Sallier chapter 50 . 2/18/2019 Terrific and original. Thank you! |
| FireFlower77 chapter 47 . 8/20/2018 they cut the skin flesh with a scalpel the uterine wall was what had to be bitten. |
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 50 . 1/3/2018 Hmmmm... Is that dreaded tomorrow going to come? Hmmm... please write more. |
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 37 . 11/30/2017 Bout to have a 'JK' review moment and say... Half these questions didn't even need to be asked. I thought vamps were smart? And I thought bella had full recall of what happened to her in the dream. Because if she had that, then she had the training for her shield as well. Pfft. Like duh. So disappointing to read, 'I don't know' when you as a reader could think up 3 very 'plausible' reasons to explain the situation. Shame. And WOW... look how they lie to Irinia. SMGDH. They need to pay for that. |
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 36 . 11/30/2017 Hmm... This chapter could've been more. It was poised for serious drama. Opportunity missed i suppose. - Still Edward getting in the way of Jane, knowing full well Bella would be ok... pfft that as roll my eyes stupid. |
