*nosebleed* That was awesome x] I know its a one shot but your really good! Please continue!

I like the term "manjuices". I'm going to remember that.

I probably will now call my friend manjuice. xD

This is a good story.

Great! :D

I liked it well written for your first one of the better one-shots I've read. ;)

A horny Naruto... nice one if you ask me. the beginning was orginal but you ended it like other fics. I expected something else.

generally it was nice written ;)

DAMN YOU SAI AND SAKURA! YOU RUIND THE ORIGINAL PLAN! But I still loved it! Poor Mary and even poorer Naruto having to deal with mega-horny Uchiha Sasuke! Not bad for your first story! I look forward to more!

HOT! :D LOVELY! :P

Awesome story! D