| Reviews for The Dragon in the Malestrom |
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   candrariski155 chapter 31 . 7/7 actually your story is pretty good. but sorry I can't continue reading it. the reason I hate bashing characters. even though the one bashing is a character that I hate too. |
| Monster King chapter 31 . 2/6/2019 Great job |
| thoroughly-inktroverted chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 MarineAsashi, if you didn't like Naruto, why the hell are you even here? Users like you are what's wrong with this site. Go be an asshole somewhere else and leave the poor author alone. |
| TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 9/20/2018 Too bad Dracohalo is a Kishimoto a** kiss himself now, f**k him and f**k this garbage. |
| AvatarUzumaki chapter 14 . 10/20/2017 story gets better but when does naruto learn bending? I mean hinata know but not naruto |
| AvatarUzumaki chapter 9 . 10/20/2017 favorite chapter by Far! love your story and love the creativity |
| AvatarUzumaki chapter 3 . 10/20/2017 liking the story. and interesting to see a different side of azula |
| AvatarUzumaki chapter 1 . 10/20/2017 interesting idea for the story. let's see how it goes |
| Hikari Nova chapter 3 . 8/7/2017 Your idea is interesting but the 1st person view is annoying as it reads like a self insert due to it being 1st person |
| Screamindivr145 chapter 2 . 2/1/2017 Ok, this is a great idea, but I just can't read it due to the fact that you hardly put ANY punctuation in. It's run-on sentence after run-on sentence. As amazing as the idea for this story is, I'm stunned you don't understand basic punctuation. If this were fixed, I have no doubt that this story would be one of my favorites. However, looking ahead to the last chapter, I saw it was exactly the same. I'm sorry. Good luck to you and your writing. |
| Solomon Kull Kane chapter 31 . 12/16/2016 this is grate story |
| Annabell242 chapter 27 . 6/18/2016 ok i could understand the bashing to a certain point but now this is just plain ludicrous i mean seriously a pineapple with explosive tags and then ends up getting killed, not to mention what dose naruto have against gay males i mean for fucks sake his mother is technically a lesbian aka homosexual female which makes him basically a hypocrite |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016 when she and Naruto move to the whiopool the 2 had raing it as he Naruto bing the king of it and his mother with him his wife too as Queen of it , Naruto took all the frimly monly with him and others stff was his and all of the mife monly he ueds to buit it back up the whiopool and Naruto name his vaullan of his deda mom and the 2 pverd jeklord berfoer them too . |
| Salibask chapter 31 . 3/1/2016 Good story. Too bad it feels rushed! You should rewrite it. |
| Shadowolf chapter 30 . 1/18/2016 Naruto u poor and lucky (bleep) |
