This is my fav FFXIII! I keep coming back to read it again. I do hope you finish it some day! It’s such a great story! Some years have passed and I was wondering how your carrier as game writer is going. I wish you he best!

Good fic

Hello there! I had started to read your fantastic fic a long time ago, but for one reason or the other, I didnt finish it.
Until now.
Its just as fantastic as I remember! and the last chapters! OMG! I dont know how did I keep myself from reading till the end!
Besides the obvious "please finish this story" plea, I got curious about one thing.
Whats your opinion on Lightning Returns?

Why'd you have to say UNDULATE!¿ KILL ME PLZ

You amazingly put forward that reader cringe feel, nice job!

Is it just me or does lightning remind you of captain Janeway from star trek, with her coffee and all.

So ne hammer geschichte will unbedingt wissen wie es weitergeht / endet *..*

okay... this is disturbing.., err

Lighting's Reurn is out. What's keeping you waiting?

To The Author and my Fellow Reviewrs: please Check out the New Fanfic Story called Hope's New World.. The Author is doing well despite being new .. i think he or she is new ... and i Beilive each of you will enjoy his or her story. Also give the Author a Review and/or PM.

Making a character stronger for the sake of being strong is shit writing, and definitely not the way to actually make one better.

Going "Hey, this character is 'weak' in some way by my own definition. So I'll make them 'stronger' and it'll make them 'better' than they were." is a bad .

"...and I'll leave it at that"

You should left it completely alone and not just blatantly told everyone about your sexual experiences. Like, what the hell? Why would you even mention that in the first place?

Another great fanfic falling victim to abandomnent :( Ah well, nothing I can do.

Such a beautiful story. Wonderfully orchestrated. Never did I intend to start at midnight and then whoops, whadaya know, not go to bed until 4am. That's when I know I've found an epic story. So thank you for your incredible work.
Whether you finish or not, you've accomplished a wonderful tale.
Thanks!

This is my favorite Hope/Lightning fanfic story so far! This is the only story of Hopurai that I've been longing for an update :) I wish you'll post the new chapter soon.