How could no-one comment here? A nice long story, a few spelling mistakes, but nothing too serious.
Hmm, a very.. interesting premise; but I'm not sure the warrior caste would accept the relationship, or even to be led by a half-breed... xenophobes aren't well known as accepting. And how would Garibaldi get a Vorlon - while on a Shadow ship?
Anyway, inconsistencies with the 'official' world aside, it would be interesting to see more of this story - Garibaldi and a Minbari, a Minbari and Garibaldi... hahaha