You're really good! Do you know why? Cause I have really good taste and I said so. Geez, just take the compliment. Love the humor and the 4th wall stuff. Your welcome.

It has been, what, two years since I read this fic? But I remembered it straight away, it had always remained in the back of my mind (not that I've read a lot of DBZ fanfic like others), thoyugh it took me a bit to remember who Ché and Majon were. But with the first couple of lines of dialogue between Buma and Gohan I was like "yeah, THAT'S why I remember this, it's *glorious!*"

Excellent work, and glad to see you decide to carry on!

So, I know its been two years, but you put so much work into this. I really enjoyed tjis one

You don't understand, U'm loving tbus. And that TFS reference. Duuuude

This was incredibly fun

You had me from "I may have lost you in a bet."

(And very shortly there after, I thought, "the author is English too, aren't they?")

Now, I'm never sure whether people will take it as a compliment or not, but, as I am more familiar with DBZA than regular DBZ (I only watched chunks of the Ocean dub AAAAGES ago, when it was shown in the UK from around Namek to the episode where they shot Buu's dog and it was moved to a channel we didn't have)... I have automatically been hearing TFS with pretty much every line of dialogue.

(In fact, the youtube clip DBZ binge I've been having this past week made me surprised at how damn close TFS are to the "proper" dub.)

I do not consider this to be remotely a bad thing.

(I really was not expecting it with 16. But there was no way for me to not read that as TFS!16, and I'm three-quarters sure that may have been the intention.)

Should you ever continue/finish this, I would definitely want to see how it pans out.

Excellent and enjoyable, especially given the shocking lack of Krillen (and DBZ in general, compared to, say Naruto, which gets the lion's share) fanfic.

Please update

Guess that's all we're getting. I loved the whole thing but I especially loved 17 in this. It seemed like he was supposed to be silly and not likable but I liked him.

I feel like Yamcha and 17 are hitting it off

If I could I would hold you at gun point to make you finish this story. Just joking. Just a little. Seriously though you NEED to finish this story. I've waited 7 years to finish this story.

I am looking forward to the conclusion of thid story! You are a wonderful writer and I love all the pop culture references in every chapter!

interesting. I am going to say right now that if Krillin and Android 18 end up copulating with anyone other than each other, I will be very upset. That being said, I have no way of forcing you to do anything, since about all I know is your nationality (but I have no idea where you live). Thus, it's simply a request for Krillin and Android 18 (especially Krillin, who you've made go through a LOT) to get what they deserve.

So that explains a lot. Oh boy...

The chapter wasn't boring, so don't worry. Also, I got the impression you were British from some of the terms you used (not that that's a problem, mind you). Enjoying this story.

Gotta love 17's sense of logic. :)