Excellent scène. 90 000 and counting gave me chills

Love. Love. Love. Love. So. Much.

OMG! I loved this! And your Damian was absolutely brilliant.

This is really good.:) if you ever do get the chance, please continue this series.

Great story

This is a very good story. Easily the best Damien or Lian centric I have read; though admitedly I haven't read many Loan stories. I also agree that Loans death was in poor taste and then what they had Roy turn to in the Rise of Arsenal mini series.. (No specifics invade you haven't read it) I really cannot wait to read the next story in this series. For a first DC fix this is incredibly awesome.

I really liked this story. I don't know much about Lian, but i do like (strangely enough) Damian, even though he can be a pain, the point is he IS trying, which you show really well. How he is fighting how he was raised to be more like his father, you can see the conflict in your writing. I really look forward to the next chapters that you post!

Awesome.

The DC Universe kills off/maims/does something horrible to characters for emotional impact like there's no tomorrow! But anyway, great work on this. Nicely done.

Very Good story I 've hardly read Roy in comics But fell in love with Lian IN Fan FIC Mostly I hate that they Killed her She was Great ,the person Who Set Roy apart from the pack for me, A single dad. AS for Damion I usually hate the brat But he's good here

I really liked this, the beginning sentences were a bit stilted, but once you got into the flow of the story that vanished. Now, I don't know much about Lian, but Damian's interactions with her, his annoyance yet begrudging protectiveness to her, were spot on with what I know of his character. Especially with Dini's version of Damian. I liked that even when he wast trying to prove a point, he stayed nearby and just out of sight. And when he was taking her out of the city he told her to close her eyes, so she wouldn't see.

I'll rec this for you on Livejournal. Good luck with writing more to this series of stories!

You're right, I mean that is true he's been trained by the League of Assassins most of those (or at least their elite)guys are the equal or near equal of of his father and he did design the flying batmobile so he's smart to, I always figured the spoiled rotten thing was an act to get lure his enemies into a false sense of security

I can't wait for more of this. This was so good, and you made me hate Damian a little less, which is always a good thing.