I get that chapter 1 and 2 are not connected at all, but it would be way less mileading if you added the Varia as characters. After all none of the characters listed as main characters are involved in chapter 1.

Also, this chapter was confusing, but funny :)

Lol lussuria is always hilarious but why didn't anyone just run away... Or even look away?

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Please make a sequel! This was just too good! Damn, I was laughing so hard I almost died along with them!

Oh god this made me laugh so so so much XDXD

Update soon please

love this fic XD great, keep it up

This story is brilliant...rofl I literally couldnt stop laughing XD

this fanfic was beautiful XDXD

I loved it

2THE MARSHMALLOW GOD HASNT ABANDONED ME!" and Luss's poldancing XDXD that was just geniuos

This was one of the funniest fanfics i've ever read! well done :D

Lazy~ And here I was hoping for lemon-y goodness. ):

holy shit. seriously MADE MY DAY, NO MORE LIKE MY MONTH. This was amazing, i can NOT stop laughing awesome job~

Nice story. I like it. Update soon please.

that was the most horrifying and scariest thing Lussuria could have done that will permanently blind anyone's eyes.

THAT WAS HILLARIOUS! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I was listening to the song as I read this and I was just cracking up that was hillarious!

I loved that fanfic the song I still don't know how that got Squalo turned on but, whatever thats him that was really good