I hope you continue this, as for straight couple ships... Wait, I don't have any! Lolol. Sorry, anyways, hope to read more work.

Finally got time to review. There are so many things going right with this story. The comedy really does bust up my side like its supposed to, and there are several moments that I just have to stop reading completely to regain myself or I just reread a line over and over because it is so go. Keep up the good work!

Retarded comedy IS comedy. Retardation is what makes comedy comedy.

ROTFLMFAO! This story is hilarious! I was laughing like a troll at everything that Ryuk said! Lol "BLOW HIM, BLOW HIM, BLOW HIM, BLOW HIM!" Ryuk's like Light's dirty friend! XD And ewwww, Shinigami cum! Gross! XP Aside from that, L & Light's sex scene was great! I wasn't sure if you were gonna make L seme (since he had Light chained & was acting all dominant, lol), but the way you transitioned as soon as Light was uncuffed made the sudden switch believable. :) So nice job, it was REALLY hot. X) And I hope you update this soon and finish it (at least eventually) cause it's pretty hard to find decently written DN yaoi fics that are so funny; I mean, usually it's total crack spazziness (lol), or it's well written but doesn't have any yaoi... *pout* Bye now ;)

That was FUCKING hot - just so you know :D

Revenge in this case is sweetest with out sugar!

~Harmony

I can totally see Watari snapping and making him eat healthy!

~Harmony

I LOVE this! Ryuk is totally hallirious XD and I really hope you continue this story :)

I laughed my ass off through this whole story. It's cute. It's romantic. It's fucking hilarious. I love it 3

I just have to say, the whole time reading your story, I have a giant grin on my face.

xD

But what really got me was this line:

'"Light, where the hell are we? Is this where people get raped? Are you going to lose your virginity? Will Light Yagami finally become a…MAN?" Ryuk asked.'

My tummy still hurts from laughing. :D

Teheh, so cute x

Wow long time no read, welocme back! Can't wait to read the next chapter. *smiles*

it's obvious that you've got a great sense of humour... when ever ryuk said something i couldn't stop laughing... "that's a LIE!" and the ending almost killed me (xD)tha't SO in his character. plz keep writing :D xx

whoa! THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!

the shinigami cum thing made me nearly

choke on my tea laughing! XD write more plz! \)

All I can say is wow...you really out did yourself on this one...it was gooooooood :)