If it was not for the stupidity of saving snape the moron child abuser following the same stupid path as cell and other morons, he story may be regulars or even good as it is now is just crap

Great story. I agree with you about the last 2 books. Hope your book store is doing great.

I enjoyed this and when explaining the plot to my son he said it sounded like an open letter to JKR in the form of a story. Gotta admit, he was right, it does, but I doubt she'll ever know. This should have been what HBP was like, and even DH, instead.

You now need to finish this.

Fun story, and I enjoyed the Remo Williams shout-outs, too. Hope you decide to continue it one day, and/or post some other treats, you have a very enjoyable writing style and interesting ideas...thanks for posting!

Great again. I felt like I was in a arena cheering, "Go Harry! Go Hermione!" Love seeing those two kick butt.

That was great. I love Harry basically saying F-U to Wizarding Britain (who do nothing but prove themselves utterly useless throughout the story) and realize that Hermione is the most important person to him. Those two together would be unstoppable.

I just found your story, and would love to see what happens next, especially to Dumbledore and the Ministry. Thanks for writing.

Good story. I think it ends well with the end of chapter 2. I would not be inclined to try to continue it. However, you do write well, and I would enjoy reading more of your writing.

Brilliant piece of fanfiction...absolutely fantas(fic)

Fascinating story, excellent well documented arguments... I look forward to seeing where the story goes from here.

good story wish there was more

Yes, please do continue this!

Nice job on this chapter! (I'm sure I'll write a review for ch 1 event.)

Brilliant! Love all the straight talking and action.