ok, well, there are a few things i don’t get. why does fang have a bugatti? that thing is very expensive. even if officer hall has a lot of money, a bugatti is like, 2.5 mill and very conspicuous. so if fang drives that around the school and starts tailing people he’s gonna be picked out from, hundreds of different cars. i just found it a little weird. another thing is that arizona and new york is like, 2k miles from each other so it was a little confusing when max said that the criminal needed to get as far away from arizona as possible when they were in new york city. how far do you mean? like, china or something? sorry, these were just two things that kept bugging me, i don’t mean to sound like i’m complaining. maybe you could clear this up a little? otherwise, the story is good so far. interesting, and very different from other plots, if a little rushed. keep it up. :)

AHHHHHHHHH GINISH!

AWESOMS

It's one thing to leave a story, but to leave it with a cliffhanger. Like wtf were you even thinking?! Get back here right now and continue your damn story. I'm super angry because this is the best fanfic of life and it isn't even finished. It has been FIVE years. FIVE FREAKING YEARS! Ok I'm done venting now. This story deserves like 40000000 more reviews. I love your story so much and I need to see the ending. So chop chop! Let's go!

I dont care that it has been five years. u need to update. u can not leave the story like this, it is to good. UPDATE...NOW!

Dude its been five years almost. Im begging you please carry on i need yo know what happens youre just so amazing at writing i cant stand not knowing

love ya and your an ah-mazing writer but you can not do this to me you have to finish this story! Please?! Its awesome!

Ya'll is gramatically correct; it's a contraction between you and all. I should know. Down in Tennessee, we always have to prove Yankee teachers wrong.

Don't do this to my emotions! I need to know what is going to happen. You must finish the story

Ummmm no this isn't ok. Why haven't you updated! I need this story in my life right now! Don't do this to me. Don't you dare end this story without finishing it

I LOVE YOU AND ALL BUT U GOT TO UPDATE LIKE IT IS SOOOO GOOD AND I WOULD LOVE IF U UPDATED IT PLEASE

You haven't updated it yet

WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOU?! I SPENT ALL DAY READING THIS AMAZING STORY ONLY TO FIND OUT THAT YOU AREN'T GOING TO FINISH IT! AND THE WORST PART IS YOU LEFT IT AT A CLIFFHANGER! WHY YOU DO THIS?! YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS AMAZING STORY! LIKE WHAT THE HECK!

Once or twice a month?! TRY THREE FREAKING YEARS! I live your story the way it is, just that YOU NEED TO UPDATE. AND DONT IGNORE THIS EMAIL OR THIS REVIEW. JUST UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY

Zomg you have to keep writing this or I will kick you but into next week! This is really good and is getting really really interesting now you HAVE GOT TO FINISH THIS! Pretty please with Iggy on top ( you get it? Cause his hair is... Never mind) pleeeeeeeease and I know I put max's and nudge's saying together that was intentional. So again pretty please keep writing this story it's awesome! Like fang and max ending up together awesome!

Flying high,

HOOT HOOT

P.s. sorry if there's spelling mistakes or wrong words in this I am doing this from my iPod... XP