I really liked this story. I've read it too quickly, not savoring it completely, blame it on my impatience xD But the way Mello felt when Matt came back to the club... It was so helpless, he wanted him to understand him and give his old life up for him but knew on the other hand that he can't expect this much from his old friend whom he left a long ago... Ah, being in two minds is sth I like in fics :D
A nice way to end it, thought it annoys me a bit to not know what you had in mind for the two of them :)
Good job!

XD I like it!

Awkward demon from hell. HAHAHAHA I love that description!

Just another story to remind me of why you're one of my favorite authors. Loved it!

loved it

totally love the tug and pull of their feelings for each other!..._...my heart just broke when Mello left Matt with just a note...T_T...and poor Matt was suffering so much!...but i just hate it that Matt went back to the room three times since Mello told him not to go...T_T...but nonetheless i am happy that they are together...hehehe...Mello is sooo cool to think of a solution that works well for him...He gets Matt and one month to capture Kira...not bad of a plan, ne?..._~...i am a romantic sort of gal, so i would like to say that they lived happily ever after in death or alive..._

O_Odamn you for that ending

i so knew it. :D

One of the best characterdeath fanfics I've read! You made it so heroic and sad at the same time, and the plot was well played through.

I laughed at KaibaCorp too much

What an interesting take on the "Where the hell did Matt go?" question. A strip club. Creative, and fucking hott. :D Although Matt finding rape therapeutic is a little fucked up, but coping is coping.

Anyway, it was a a fun and quick read (meaning I couldn't stop) and I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Okay, that wasn't as bad as I was expecting XD;;

You kept mentioning it was gonna end kinda like Choices so I was worried, but nice way to end it. And ooo to the other story your working on

Wonderful story all the same. :D

I'm BACK! :D

And this IS a happy ending. I mean it ends on a happyish note, so I am pleased :)

Emotional wise, I think you wrote them better in this fic than ET so far, as a whole. Not sure why but they seem...yep. They seem yep. Idk, I can't think, I just got home XD

...bitch...i love you. I hate you...wtf should I do w/you? you need to be punished for this! It can't end there! XD

:P

this fic is so good, by the way :D

awesome.

Sorta a fluffy chapter. And "The Hunger" seems scary O_O. But that could be just me...