no you have to continue it can't stop laughing

You did well. It was quite entertaining. Though, that first song was cringe worthy. I can see why Kanae would smash the offending object along with the CDs within. I would actually like to read more of this, if you are willing to expand it.

That was hilarious , I really enjoyed this . Good job !
lazyass out !

Not that good.

This was good, too bad it was a one shot. Definitely has potential.

the love me girls in a band ..that sounds like a great plot for a fanfic!your one shot was funny..I can definetlly imajine the girls back stage ahaha

Bwahahahaha. While I generally detest songfics, this one really amused me. I can imagine Lory in tears after hearing their rendition of a love-love song into a fuck-love song. lol. Great job!