Oh wait I was wrong! Rex is alive!

I loved it! Just fact-checking(these things bother meIt is a hyperbaric chamber, not a pod, and Rex is dead, much to my dismay. Please keep writing!

Amazing, yet pretty intense...
I’m going to re-read The Protector to feel better again.

It was an emotional roller coaster but awesome job!

Powerful, but sad. Very well written.

this is the angstiest story yet. if and when you decide to continue writing these types of stories, I'd gladly read them. wonderful simply wonderful

She says "don't stop". Then she tells him to stop. Wow she's indecisive.

I know that force choking your pregnant side is bad and all. But it's amazing he still loves her, ecspecially after being burned alve after having both his legs cut of. I don't see how padme can blame vader for becoming a Sith. Anakin did that, and he did it for any way. As far as I'm concerned, that both missed their children's childhood. Padme slept for a long time and vader was out through billions of different types of pain. He had much worse than her and it easnt entirely his fault.

I am completely on Anakin's side here, Padme is sending far too many mixed signals. So many that it reminds me of a song from the 40's: Merry-go-runaround from the classic comedy Road to Bali.

Leia is so DEVIOUS! I love it!

Uh-oh. I think we all know, if Vader gets mad, bad stuff ensues.

Wow! This story seemed... darker than a lot of your others. I have to admit, I definitely didn't expect that. That's okay though, I like depressing stories. At least it didn't end depressing

It was great, just like most of your work. However, I thought maybe Anakin and Padmé's fights seemed kind of repetitive. They seemed to happen every few chapters, have a bit of tension and discomfort after, and then an apology. And then they just... stopped.

I also think the divorce idea was a bit extreme, I mean, I'm sure Padmé needed a break but it seemed like she didn't have any second thoughts about permanently leaving him until after he'd disappeared. I would think their love would be stronger than that- however, the idea made for an interesting plot!

And again... Padme is all in a huff when Vader is 100% right... and yet he backs down and apologizes. Why doesn't Padme just drop by and see Palpatine herself with the way she's acting?

I just can't sympathize with Padme here. When my father was sent away on business trips we were always told to leave him alone when he first got back because he was jet lagged to hell and back and needed to rest and recalibrate. Luke at the least should get that. Just makes them all look whiney and selfish with the whole 'Daddy doesn't love me' routine when they are teenagers who should know better on their own and Padme is a silly cow for not understanding too. I mean jeez, surely Bail had the same thing after going to the senate, right?

'Fazing'? I think you mean 'hazing'.