Amazing!
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I love this!

This is... thought provoking. I find this to be deep, and terribly appealing. I particularly enjoy stories in which the character reflects upon there life. Thier past, present, future, personality... the possibilities are truly endless. In my mind, this piece portrays Silena's feelings of lost, anguish, guilt, and regret she has at this point in the book. I see this as inspiring. Many may find this depressing, or upsetting because they do not like the character in such pain. However, this is inspiring. Why? Because she did find herself, a milisecond before her death. You have accuratly depicted an unwritten scene in The Last Olympian, which the few who dare to attempt often fail terribly. Excellent. Peace, Love, & Life.

this was a rly good, moving story. It rly explains how silena felt in tlo. keep writing ur good!