Quite good tho, this time Natsu is the starring.. I can't believe you relate 5 to 10 minutes of forgetfulness with a story.. haha

WOW. awesome story!

like its really happening in the real world.

i cant help but imagine about things. LOL

roock on! \m/

loved it..so cute!

~Nice. :"D Though aides from the fact that you need to make it more obvious that you just switched POVs, you did a very nice job! keep up the good work!

*claps* Short but good!