This story was one big paradox as you said XD It was an interesting concept with a plot twist at every turn.

Kind if a crap random ending that is filled to the end with plot holes and just screams "the author was just tired of writing this" or "this story was so broken that the author gave up trying to fix it". The first is understandable given how much of a dumpster fire this turned out to be, the second is just as likely though.

Naruto literally keeps making the same mistake. You need to mix it up a bit.

Mizuki should've been the first key. That way during the early chapters you could've really hooked the audience. Only he should went back the first time though. Things could've gone so much smoother.

Oh, time travel now. Obviously this story wasn't already crazy enough.

You should really rename this story Deus Ex Bullshit

I really hate minato, I just do. I really wish Kushina was actually angry with him. It infuriates me that he isn't paying for his mistakes. Naruto's mad at him, big deal. He still got his wife and life back.

As amazing as this story is, I really think it could've been significantly better. You just threw way too much at us at one time. It's hard to keep track of it all. If you taken things a bit slower and developed it out more I'd understand. I can also see the benefit if blindfolding the audience. It's just too much, especially when half of it is, somewhat poorly explained, original content.

Damn... that chapter was something else. I'd wager Tenten's little joke was the truth. I bet Naruto is a prince. Dustin probably kept them apart to protect Tenten after her mother died. He was probably worried about her being targeted.

Can't believe Tenten's mom still married that guy after that sleazy trick he pulled.

Going through this story I realized a couple of things. The story idea and the plot are great, but the actual writing is horrible. You messed up a good story trying to make people be impressed with Naruto and making conversation that doesn’t make sense just to show Naruto off. Like I said the idea is great but the finishing is horrible.

This shit was great! One of the best I have read.

Beautiful!~

third time i am reading the story in almost 9 years one thing i saw in anime is that kakashi checked sasuke s affinity before teaching him chidori and in filler episode lighting affinity was also a reason sasuke could not learn fire ball easily

Well...that was a roler coaster right here and i got lost in the middle but over all 9/10.

alcohol doesn't expire it gets more potent with age but it never goes bad bear may go flat but never bad People drunk 500 year old bottles.