Reviews for Fall
Guest chapter 23 . 5/19
I LOVVVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Mmchocolaholic chapter 23 . 9/7/2018
More please
WinterWolf1331 chapter 23 . 7/21/2016
Please continue! I love this story!
Red wolfs chapter 23 . 11/26/2015
Red: Whoa, never pictured those two as a couple before today, but it totally works, damn
Wolf: What are you talking about?
Red: This damn awesome fic
Lobo: *reads quickly* Your right, it makes sense.
Wolf: Oh you mean that fic the author abandoned.
Mina: Eehhhhhhhh!?
Wolf: You didn't know?
Wolfy: of course the fuck not, why would we?
Wolf: Well, Baka, the last update was three years ago that should be pretty telling
Red: The bitch, what the hell!? I want to see more scary Hiruma and what the fuck happens when he catches Sena!
Lobo: He pretty much said what was going to happen
Red: Shut up, it's different than reading it yourself, it's like a damn teaser or something, baka! *pulls out katana*
Lobo: Eep, gomen nasai! Don't hurt me! *runs away like girl*
Red: Get back here!
Wolfy: Man, Hiruma and Red would get along together real well
Wolf: Are you kidding me? If those two teamed up, they could take over the world in less than a month.
Wolfy: No kidding, they're scary.
Both: If you don't want to end up like Lobo, please start updating quickly please?!
Red:*pops out of the shadows* Are ya fucking dead ya fucker, where the hell is the rest of this damn story?! Do we have to use the dragon balls to wish ya back to life or somethin'.
( P.S. If you don't know what the dragon balls are, you suck )
Guest chapter 23 . 3/28/2015
I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ
fifipool chapter 23 . 9/2/2014
j'adore ! c'est totalement leurs caractères ! cette histoire est super, vraiment !
Guest chapter 23 . 8/23/2014
why would you abandon this fic? :(((
filipalope88 chapter 23 . 8/6/2014
another chapter please
sleepingisbliss13 chapter 23 . 2/7/2014
LOVE this story! Keep going!
Gentle Snow chapter 23 . 1/30/2014
Great story. Hope you'll continue it :)
Neko-Setra chapter 23 . 11/21/2013
Ahhhhhh omg! This is such a good story! I really hope you find the time to finish it! This chapter was the cutest thing I have ever read between these two. :D This story is so well done and written (yes a few grammer and spelling errors, but who the crap cares about that!?). So I really hope you will continue this wonderful series and not get tired of it. TTwTT
Guest chapter 23 . 10/31/2013
Love this story :)

(Though you may need to recheck the previous chapters because i think you have been writing shocked as chocked)
Xandra-A chapter 23 . 6/26/2013
*giggles* *blushes* *favorites*
Thanks ' v '
Zephy.rose chapter 23 . 6/24/2013
so awsome
LunarStar98 chapter 23 . 5/24/2013
KAWAII!
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