The Weaver Option is EPIC, I don't see what's epic about this, sorry. It's like watching Fairy Tail, okay if you're absolutely bored. After reading a big chunk of it, I
just feel I wasted that time. It's not very realistic, too much bullshit. Is it Starcraft or HP, why would something be called fuel crystal when they have magical and silly names for everything. There is only Harry in this story, everyone else is cardboard cutout. His parents, they raised him so they're gone, I actually thought they somehow got killed even though I knew they hadn't. His scientist girlfriend? lol... he's too busy staying in the warzone to take care of an teenage girl, I didn't know military did that.. His cute little brother suddenly became a sociopathic advisor to him. There's more and someone with better eye for literature would spot plenty wrongs I haven't, me I just have a feeling this is wrong and subpar, not terrible but I wasn't never one to read/watch something just because it wasn't terrible.

When do you plan on updating?

I know people are m power do this, but considering it was a relatively closed session In which harry effectively convinced the others to put aside their hesitation and suspicions, because he himself felt he could trust Ginny Weasley I don’t think he should get to had off blame on this to Xeno not should Xeno accept it. Xeno May have failed to uncover anything on Ginny but harry is the one who is so confident in his ability to judge people that he thought he could trust her on her word nobunbreakable vow no extra scrutiny. Ginny played him personally not his staff who he so easily overrules but he himself to his face on more than one occasion, if he cant see that then he deserves to watch her tear down everything he has worked towards. Forcing him to become a dark lord or other type of warlords archetype who can only ever amount to being an illegitimate tyrant who obtained power via terrorism and maintains it via iron n fisted dictatorship unloved by the people only feared

Oh no, surely this is not abandoned...

I absolutely LOVE how you wrote the conversation between Harry and the King, it's hair-raising in its intensity! Brilliant work my friend, with only a few paragraphs, the King instantly became my new favorite character. You managed to make him into this story's Yoda: a physically nonthreatening figure that is infinitely wiser than all the other characters, and commands vast respect because of it.

So I really enjoyed the first half or so of this fic, but everything past the war on France kinda sucked imo. There’s a distinct feeling of Harry, his advisors, and his military all getting progressively more incompetentand the only reason I can see for this is to create the illusion of tension. There is no reason that Harry should have come close to losing the final fight with Jaeger other than to handicap him in the future. Elicia went from being his dependable moral compass to basically hating him. Riddle somehow manages to remain relevant when he has no resources and has retained his homicidal tendenciesNO ONE would trust a known terrorist with unknown motives with black ops strategies.

My main gripe I suppose is that the feats the Empire and Harry himself accomplishes technologically and magically seem to be irrelevant any time a new opponent steps up. Harry can level a city block by snapping his fingers? Better make sure he never does that again. French army has no electricity? That’s fine it’s barely a hindrance against a highly mobile, more technologically advanced army with superior training, superior arms, and that has local guerrilla support

Reread this story for the past week. Love love love it still. Kind of frustrated that I can’t find more political based stories like this. And insanely curious to know how things would have gone if you had pursued the harem/political marriages plot line. Hope life is treating you well. Will you be returning to writing soon?

Noooo...Hogwarts...thats a living fcking castle...living history...you do NOT tear down the memories of old times, but cherish them so you can LEARN from them...and its just cruel, as that castle is almost alive...and NOT responsible for anything...the biggest problem is, if the Empire did that to everything they did not like, and just ereased them...then i cant see it prospering more then a few decades/centuries...maybe until someone clever is on the throne(who knows real history), but the moment that changes it will be like the Romans...content with everything, thinking that they are right in everything, and that they can do anything...right untill their eventual downfall...and there will be Empire no more!

I will still give this a try, but it is hard when you know the ending from the start, and you do not really like it and its implications...

Yah greeat

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Just binged the whole thing, an incredible story so far. While it’d be great if it was completed, there are worse places to leave it and I’ve really enjoyed it, so thank you for the great tale

I don't quite understand why cities would openly rebel. I would understand if it was american states that would try to cut ties with the central government. Is the UK that seperatist. I get ireland and scotland trying to break off but regular cites openly rebelling against the government. Harry is in charge of the army. So where are the rebel militia getting food, training, guns and ammunition. How are they even fighting against a veteran army. And is there no national sentiment in the UK. They aren't even fighting a foreign army, but their own army. Mass riots I get but open rebellion with militias when just a few months prior they were fighting the Spanish. The fighting and the rebellion seems really forced. Thought the story was going great, but this arc quality seems to have taken a nosedive

Interesting idea wasted on the HP universe. It's such a deviation from the canon that I forgot it was a HP fic. Lol should just make an original story with no HP characters and this story would be a MILLION times better. I'm impressed with the idea, but the lack of HP made it a waste of time if you're looking for AU HP.

Why is Algue named Longbottom?
He is the brother of Augusta who was the wife of the father of Longbottom, former head of the family.
Considering that this title is passed from father to eldest son, we know that Augusta's husband had to be the Longbottom head, whereas Augusta had a different maiden name.
This maiden name should be the surname or Algie.
If you want to name him Longbottom, then he would be the brother of Neville's grandfather.
His name also is likely Algernon, which is why there are different fanon concepts, such as him being Algernon Croaker.

well that's an exciting twist!