Interesting take! I particularly like how you've written Sarah, Becker, and Lester, left behind at the ARC. Sarah's voice is always hardest for me, but you've captured her well. Nice work!

Awesome, really liked the fic, very well written and characterisation seemed spot on! Any plans for an episode 2? hint hint! :)

Great story... I look forward to reading more so dont take to long please...

the story is excellent, character development is deep and conaistent, the writing is good quality with few spelling mistakes...

The only problem I have found is a pet-hate of mine: British secondary schools being called 'high-school', it's nothing big in a work such as this but it annoys me.

British education is set out as follows- primary school (4-11), secondary school (11-16), college (16-20) and then university (18).

Hope you continue with this venture and that this will help (and that it's not just me being nuerotic)...

So the dude is Danny's brother. Wow. Didn't see that coming.

The End? Hope you write more. Episode 2 perhaps?

Poor Sarah :(

And physically poor Becker. Ouch, cave bears.

Onto the next chapter!

What the heck do you mean, fini? I want more!

So Danny finally found his brother? That was unexpected, and very cool.

But what about Mackenzie? What's he up to? Did the little furry creature that followed Connor and Abby muck up the future? How does Jenny figure into any of this?

Questions! I have questions! LOL! But this was a great story. Really!

Great job with the action scene - Becker vs the bear, LOL! Glad to see Meg is handy at something, finally.

And I'd just like to say...go Lester! Take that, PM. I'm glad he's not given up on Connor, Abby and Danny, and that Sarah finally knows he's on her side.

So the sub-humans made off with Danny. Will they have a way to get him home, I wonder? Well, why wonder? Off to read chapter 11!

Ah, love it :-D

Had an absolute blast reading this - especially with the daily updates, really made my week.

Thank you for making me smile with both the fic and replies and I look very much forward to reading the next one!

Jess

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Okay...Star Wars? Leia and Luke? Am I close? ::grins::

Another good chapter. Poor Sarah, she has a lot of issues going on right now. And what's up with Mackenzie? That snippet of conversation certainly sounded nefarious. ::twirls imaginary moustache::

So...the pteranadon was sitting on Connor? LOL! Seriously! Love the visual I'm getting of that. Glad Abby dragged him out of there. Now, if they can get the anamoly device to work.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Hell yes they can! :-D:-D :-D

Jess

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Whoop! She's up! Lol.

Poor Rex, a soundboard for everyone's problems eh? :-p

Roll on Chapter 9 says I!

Jess

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ARGH! you can't end there. the racetrack anomoly has closed!

Good chapter! I feel for poor Lester - he's trying so hard. I wish Sarah would cut him some slack. She really should listen to Rex, LOL!

So Danny is hanging with the Kalif. Was the scene with the rebels from V? That's what popped into my head. I can't wait to see what's become of the Arc so far in the future.

Glad to see that Abby's up and operational. Though of course Connor has got himself into trouble again. Good news: anomoly device. Bad news: pteranadon. Holy cliffhanger, batman!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Ah, well, I feel slightly reassured that if he did get lost Abby'd totally come get him ;-)

Loving the update plan - Bring it on!

Jess

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