he deserves someone better than this pitiful human scum

Oh. My. World... I think the butterflys in my stomach just had a orgasm.

This is osme crazy shi* you wrote just now O . O How do you do it?

Ah, I've finally gotten around to reviewing this. Course it's been a few years since so I wasn't as greatly affected by this as I would have been had I first read this.

I have to say, Chi, this is the best lemon I've read and nothing would ever come close. XD It's funny how I say that really nowadays. XD

I did find this hot but it was more sweet and beautiful than well, others I've read. I'm usually not used to reading lemons that aren't ahem, raunchy. So that's why it took two years to review this, despite having read it before. XD

But two years is a lot to have come a long way since I've been reading CCFA so I know your writing's better than this now. XD

Also, I hope that Genesis and Mireya have wonderful babies XD

very good i like it.

...I'm not really much for lemon, but this was quite poetic. My only critique is that it seemed as though you were rushing through the climax of the story (no pun intended, I freaking swear...)

I really liked it though. Genesis is such a smart ass.

The ending made me smile, with the whole earring thing? Poor Mireya can never seem to win.

This has serious poyiental, please update soon.

I did as you said and know I have to say thi- ... O.o. You are a genius! And for your first time at writing a lemon thus is good.

You have guts!

Anyways keep on spreading the love that Genesis and Mireya

Aww. :) Instead of being a lemon, it turned into something really sweet instead!

You shouldn't call it a lemon Chiharu-Chan! This was better than a lemon.

You touched on their feelings and gave us reasons why they were doing what they were doing.

Genesis is such a romantic person.

I must be one sorry guy because even I couldn't handle that. The way you told us everything that happened was so-

I can't even think of the word to say. My brain left me. It was good but I couldn't handle it. I was not ready for what you had written and that's my fault.

Next time I'll be ready.

Nice oneshot. Update soon. If you aren't going to update you should write a sequel.

xD

All the things I could just about say to you have already been said Chichi. I should just come clean now. I thought you were going to write a huge awkward scene because you kept saying you didn't know how to right a lemon.

But for your first lemon I have to say that you blew everyone else out of the water. This might be the only lemon that makes sense in this fandom.

I've been here for a long time. xD

There's no way I'm going to read this a second time, but as far as I could tell you didn't make any mistakes. Why do you know how to write everything?

You're going to make it big one day.

You weren't kidding when you said you wrote a lemon for the two!

The way you write is dreamlike. It was like I was floating on a cloud. XD Don't take it the wrong way. You have such a nice writing style.

If anything I'm glad you decided to stick to this fandom. We love you Chiharu-Chan-10-Springs!

You had Genesis IC, and it was a nice change from all the yaoi lemons of him.

Good luck with you future writings!

XD i have to say that i didn't get passed the kiss lilyara. i couldn't do it but that just proves how much of a great writer you are! i feel weak now because i couldn't read on like everyone else did. mireya and genesis are still great together?

DX i was forced to read some of the ending since that is where the review button is but that part was cute.

HOT.

Chimbutt! /stumbles

First of all you spelled my name wrong. Change it please. :P

Second of all... Is this what I think it is? I don't want to touch it the wrong way because I think it might break! It's so... Smutty. xD /pokes story

So you really gave in and started to write the lemon? Sommy's going to have a feild day with this. But not before me. :P I knew you would eventually write a lemon for us. You kept denying it but now look at you! And if you wrote this in a day you have some mad skills.

I knew you knew how to write a lemon all along! You had just been lying to us. xD

You had nothing to worry about! This is perfect. I don't see anything wrong and for your first lemon it's really good. It's just... I didn't expect it to be so full of smut... xD It's nice to see the author is confident in her work.

Genesis never stops thinking about LOVELESS. He was going to score and he kept saying lines from it. That's true love. He must be in love with that book. xD

You win Chimpbutt. I will never doubt your skills again. You kind of gave me a little more than I could chew.

I never knew you could write so... much smut. xD

Okay I'll stop talking now and end this review.