I think you made Roxas to emotional. Isn't he still discovering his feelings in 358/2 days?

This is awesome, please continue this.

haha at the after the last sentance

It appears to have been nearly three months since this was last updated. I would love to see it continued. As of today, the story is 1 year and 10 days old...

This is great! Although Roxas really shouldn't have blown up like that at Ventus...

I love the comedy at the end of each chapter! Please write more!

Me: *shoots Xemnas*

Now that that's out of the way, onto business. Heartless here, Heartless there, Heartless EVERYWHERE! XEMNAS! HOW DARE YO- wait, I killed him... never mind. Keep on typing!

stupid roxas, treat your dragon better! roxas should have taken ventus with him back to the orgy- he would stand a better chance that way.

update soon!

This story is getting really really good in plot and stuff... It's awesome!

:P

Wow your mean with the review thing, but anyways...

Your story is fairly interesting in both concept and the way it's actually going. I hope that you update soon and that the story continues to go the way it is.

this is getting exciting! so i was wondering if i could use your idea and do my own version of this story. it's not that i think i could do it better it's just i want to put my own spin on things.

so please reply and update soon. i just want your permission now so that i can write it later when in the future. i might not do it any time soon but i want to do sometime.

Uh-oh... this is not good! The whole Organization wreaking havoc on one world... even if it is the biggest world ever... Keep on typing!

Poor Xion. There she is, worrying about her boyfriend, and then Xemnas says not to tell her anything.

Xemnas is gonna regret it at one point

It's nice good to see ya' again! I wonder what else you have planned for the story? Don't slack off on us! Keep on typing!

PLEASE review! I love this story and I want to hear more!