Wow, short but pretty descriptive! Not sure about the "Ice Princess" nickname though, hahaha! Sounds more like Quistis to me, but eh, whatever pops into Seifer's mind (I'm guessing Seifer called him that?) Anyway, yes, very good job!

The beginning would have to be my favourite part :D

(PS Sorry that this is a waay overdue thank you for reviewing 'Utter a Squall' :) Thanks anyway! HEh...

Nice description about Squall (exterior and interior), although I also would like more information in the fic, like for example why is he deppressed, or who left him, but for a fast look at his soul is perfect.

Nice insight into Squall's thoughts, there were a few mistakes that detracted from the experienced, but if you fixed those it is an effective look at Squall. Good work _

...was your s/n milkyway before? Cause it's confusing me... Who left him? With what you write usually, I'd say...Seifer? It's a guess... Well, good, good fic, really cool! I like that kinda depressing-like stuff, no da? Well, it was gooood! .~

~Lee~

Me: Wow. You're good. Real good. Not a lot for me to say, but that's pretty much what I think Squall feels.

Syla: WOAH! Intense!

Me: What are you doing here?

Syla: Hey! I'm aloud ta read too.

Me: tch... whatever... Please leave before you attract unwanted attention, oh alter ego of mine.

;.; pwetty. ::sniffles:: Makes ya kinda wonder whether Squall and Seif had somethin goin' on when dey was kids. . .

Squall: I was never a goat.

. . . Get a life, Squall.

O.o *blinks, sniffles, slaps Seifer*

Seifer: What the hell did I do!

. You killed him! Jerk.

Seifer: Hello! Was I the one who wrote the stroy?

Oh. . . *sniffle, sigh, giggle* Ah, so pretty though. This fic was a very short, but very well written. . . hmm, death scene? o.o I couldn't really tell, but it was good! Tee hee, keep it up. I've read all your SxS works. .~ You should write more. Ja~! *scurries off*

was that written by u?

it seems very fimiluer o yaaaaaa u sent it to me a long time a go well in other words it was exellent

i cant wait for the next poem to come out rinoa :)

This story is definately not what I expected. It's not so much a story, as it is a deep look into Squall's tortured soul. Overall, I think it is very well written, and I DO really like the last line. I hope the person who wrote it is given credit, because it is very deep and thought-provoking.