ohohohoho

such suspense

such four-year-suspense

all aside, i'm really liking this so far but seems there's an extremely slim chance of this ever being updated again.

(cries on the inside? ;_;)

oh god you haven't updated this in like two years

this is great :)

I absolutely LOVE this! It's done perfectly! Please update soon! :D

TERMINALO REAPIDO

Plz update I'm very excited for the next events

this story is funny!

UPDATE!

General: You have a great, budding story with full potential to be one of the most famous fanfics ever. BUT! You are missing a big concept. Do you read the guidelines? I'm not tryting to tattletale, but here's an exerpt:

Entries not allowed:

-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.

or two liners.

: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.

form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

See It says none of that. Although it is a very fitting format, maybe you should use regular writing style and write keyboard texts in that style. Like This: Rima texted angrily, smashing the keyboard buttons, declaring a full-fledged statement. "No."

Plot: You have an interesting plot. It's not the most original, but definitely not a boring all-around story. It's dramatic, and the characters are realistic. I give you my full praise on plot.

Grammar: You are great. Pay attention to the rules above though, because they'll be a helper. I found little to none errors, and those that I found I can't locate anymore so they must be gone.

Structure: Your voice and tone speaks of one that knows what she's talking about. You sound confident and self-assured. Just pay attention to emotions and description. I want to paint an image in my mind. Tell me setting, the subtlest of actions, and maybe some hidden humor in it.

You are a good writer. I look forward to more from you.

so? what can Ikuto and Rima do? please write the next chapter *.*

Ah! Please update this is so interesting! I got hooked pretty fast!

It's such a great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please keep writing this! U r such a great writer! :)

Oh no, Amu. Dont encourage her. But I will encourage her. And Ikuto. Yet again, you leave me...

Ducks? You don't like yaya's cute little duckies? Poor Rima. How hard is that?

I owuld kill Amu. Seh would definitely be dead.