| Reviews for Pokemance Acadamy |
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pokemonSLR chapter 1 . 10/21/2014 Brilliant news guys, im gonna be continuing Pokemance academy! after a 3 year hiatus as soon as done some major editing and rewriting it to cure my writers block. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2011 Plz plz plz update it's soundin gud |
SpaztasticStella chapter 2 . 2/21/2011 Great job on the story can't wait to read the next chapter I don't think they would know each ither unless leaf went to sinnoh yes i think the guys and the girls will get along to get them to like them |
pokemonSLRme chapter 1 . 8/20/2010 wooo gr8 story remember next time i write a fanfic check so see it makes sence (like missing words) if anyone is wondering i havnt foggoten this fanfic im just finishing my secret eater chappie and straight after ill work on this but ″no need to worry!″ that wont be too long now |
D3sstorjo chapter 1 . 8/6/2010 YAy hahaha im going to read more. Its sooooo good! |
Moonlight's Shadow Warrior chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 When it said 'but what they don't know they may be closer then they think' you actually meant May as in May, Norman's and Caroline's daughter, Max's sister, Drew's rival/*cough*lover*cough*, Manaphy's mother, one of Ash's female traveling compainions, and the girl who gets RED roses from Drew. That May. Anyway, great story so far. Keep on writing. -PokeGirlMisty :D |
funstt chapter 1 . 4/21/2010 haha the longer the chapters the better :) |
pokemaster101 chapter 1 . 4/17/2010 cool! i had a feeling that mystery guy was drew. i also knew all the main characters will be in the same rooms. Girls: misty, may, dawn, leaf Boys: ash, drew, paul, gary lol love the story. keep it up PokemonSLR! :) P.S - what's SLR stand for and/or mean? |
big big misty fan chapter 1 . 4/16/2010 well written i luv it but remember catch the characters attitude. ash is still dense but more mature misty is more patient thanks to togepi and gary is nicer |
Blank Eyes chapter 1 . 4/16/2010 Quote, 'Ash Ketchum was a guy who was sure was the person who loved to go and travel, meeting new friends and Pokemon along the way, he really had a deep passion in pokemon training and one day he is hoped to be the greatest pokemon master of all time .(a/n we should all know this by now)' The fact that you put the plot of the anime series is utterly useless. We all know what the Pokemon anime is about, so why waste time in placing it in your fic, anyways? '...he is hoped to be the greatest pokemon master of all time.' Is hoped? Doesn't he hope himself? So I think the sentence would sound better if it was, 'he hopes to be the greatest pokemon master of all time.' You should also separate some sentences like this one, '...the way, he really had...' it would look and sound better if it was something like, '...meeting new friend and pokemon along the way. He really had...' Please use spelling and grammar check. Always remember to capitalize proper nouns such as, I'm (Which means, I am. Please also take note of the apostraphe, Misty, Ash, May and whatever name you plan you use. Or maybe you can get a beta to check for your mistakes and whatnot. And don't forget to use commas as well. |
lulu halulu chapter 1 . 4/16/2010 Hm...interesting so far. Update soon please! |